Brigets Flame first September entry

[mullvaney]

Comments

[jlly_coppercorn]

Ach! They killed us.
That was very good. It was an interesting way to tell a story. Good luck this week at BF.

[mullvaney]

Thank you! I love to look at things from a different point of view.

[rephen]

Hi.

Very interesting take on the Parasite theme. And it was quite plain from early-ish that humans or humanoid civilisations might be the parasite of the galaxy. Very cool.

Good luck at BF! :D

[mullvaney]

Thank you!

[lieffeil]

Captivating. I especially loved the setup; your style made it easy to relate to not only the two characters, but also to the system they're working within. It's a generally well-meaning but seriously flawed section of their society, which gives it a... I'll go with "modern resonance", just to be ambiguous.
Tiny format inconsistency I caught:
Auchinclaus- but you were able to capture and examine one of their craft, and its crew?
(Capital?)
Enjoyed. (A lot!)

[mullvaney]

Thank you; it is a fairly small imaginitive leap from the news to fiction ;D

[katden]

Look at you with your interstellar parasites and court martial!!! Loved!
Good luck!
:D

[mullvaney]

Thanks! I'm workin gon something that could be controversial for this week . . .

[cedarwolfsinger]

Interesting take on the prompt. Well written (which is certainly not a surprise)!

[mullvaney]

Thank you so much, Cedar!