Burbank High [11/18] Part I

Feb 06, 2011 22:31

Title: Burbank High [11/18] Part I
Pairing: OnKey, 2Min
Genre: Romance, Fluff, Drama
Rating: pg-15
Summary: Burbank High. The biggest and most prestigious school in the country. With the beginning of another year, Key finds himself struggling with popularity, first love, and the arrival of a new student, Lee Taemin, turning everything upside down.
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mumuja February 7 2011, 04:46:52 UTC
spot!! for rarfroggy20
you didn't ask for one, but your just awesome so you deserve one :D

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rarfroggy20 May 3 2012, 05:09:14 UTC
Ummmmmmm... I only just now realized you left a spot for me... THANK YOU (eventhoughIalreadycommentedabillionyearsago)! I was rereading the last couple of chapters you posted and scrolled down to make sure I commented and then saw that you actualy left me a spot. o___o Wow, how could I have been so blind? >.< Buuuuuuuuut you know what I commented, so I guess what's done is done, ne? ^^

BUT OMG SERIOUSLY WOMAN WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN??? I miss this fic like crazy that I'm about to read it all over again, but the question is... WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE??? XO

Sorry, I know you're busy and everything... just... At least me you've been working on the next part of the chapter? ;_____; That'll put my Burbank-loving heart at ease. ;P

Oh, and you're the awesome one. Somehow coming up with such a cracktacular and (somehow) drama-filled story like this is just... I can't even. I wish to Shisus that I could come up with a story even remotely like this, but my mind isn't creative enough. <.I think the only complaints I have is that some of my fave girl ( ... )

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mumuja February 7 2011, 04:47:27 UTC
spot!! for xnicholee :DD

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mumuja February 7 2011, 04:48:38 UTC
spot!!! for orangeideas :))

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orangeideas February 7 2011, 13:04:49 UTC
I LOVE YOU!!!!! AND I LOVE EVERYONE IN THERE.....

*bookmarks page

thanks for the spot...

I LOVE THIS FIC TOO MUCH!!!!...

see ya at the thirteenth...

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mumuja February 8 2011, 01:01:36 UTC
hahahaha thank you!!! &hearts :)
I'm glad to see you love this fic so much!! ^^

thank you for reading and commenting!!!!! :DDD
i'll see you at the 13th! :)

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mumuja February 7 2011, 04:49:27 UTC
spot!!! for my baby choon_hee
umma loves you &hearts

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choon_hee February 7 2011, 11:31:21 UTC
OMG umm aaa..
This is soo omg!!!
I like this chapter as well,
Especially the dance practice part,
How taemin make minho die, loll
And how when key and taemin dance!!!!
Omg that's hot!! Minho and onew have to be careful now, cause their boyfriend is fucking hot!!!

Aaaaw!!!
Jinki have to tell kibum soon about his past marriage ><
Or it'll turn worse later,
Aaand WHAAAT kibum blushed just because he see CL!! Omooo I'm heartbroken TT...
Can't wait the neeext paaart I want to know how taemin and key kill their boyfriend lol

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mumuja February 11 2011, 21:08:58 UTC
hello :)

you like this chapter too?? awww i'm glad to hear that!!
hhahaha poor Minho right ^^, but he had it coming with the way Taemin was dancing so seductive :)

Yeah, he will tell Key soon, i just don't wanna push so much drama at once ^^
sorry bb, Key and CL are gonna have ummm some kind of relationship, but DON'T KILL!! its nothing to serious!! bare with my crazy plot xD

thank you for reading and commenting bb!!!
see you at my next update!! :)

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mumuja February 7 2011, 04:52:14 UTC
spot!! for megumi062989 :D

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megumi062989 February 7 2011, 11:21:08 UTC
Update! Oh wow. I'm really surprised about the number of chapters, but still, you delivered one heck of a story :DDD *2 thumbs up*
Yay! Taking my spot! Haha :DDD Thanks :))
Okay. Let me collect my thoughts first. I was totally distracted with my sister's loud music and I wasn't able to totally concentrate on reading >Anyways, I'll be fine and I can comment now. Keke ( ... )

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mumuja February 11 2011, 21:15:05 UTC
there're a lot of chapters to come right??? is it too much? : l maybe i could cut it short or something...

I love the way Taemin's face goes well with any outfit :)
like his face is made for any gender LOL as weird as it may sound hehe ^^

Jjong is always the smooth talker xD let's just hope Key doesn't kill that boy soon -___-

I find the idea of Jinki resisting the urge to ravash Kibum quite cute :), even with Jonghyun being the one delivering the sin to the older boy haha

He really was born to dance, with his fit body and all :D and key as well, eve though Key has more meat in his bones *drools*

Taemin and Key could never get angry at each other, its like physically impossible!!! maybe quarrel like normal mom-son but nothing else xD

ahahahahha those two are gonna own the show, heads down :)

thank you sooo much for reading and commenting!!!!
i appreciate the support and i'll promise you're gonna be pleased with part II &hearts&hearts

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