Castle Fic - A Terrible Hope

Nov 20, 2011 00:35

Her own screams wake her up, and it takes her a second to realize she is the one making that horrible, ragged noise.   Kate chokes back the next scream, her throat sore, her heart pounding so hard she can feel it in her fingertips, sweat sticking her hair to her neck and her cheeks.

Her eyes are wide in the darkness, but she can still see the ( Read more... )

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deedle_7 November 20 2011, 13:45:45 UTC
Oh....wow....you really capture the depth of the desperate love they have for each other. Love is not easy...but it is hopeful. Beautiful and intense.

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lattelady6 November 20 2011, 16:17:54 UTC
Beautiful insight into Kate. Loved it.

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bluewillowtree November 20 2011, 21:37:43 UTC
This is truly excellent. I'm so glad you wrote this. Thank you.

The whole fic is just beautiful, but I particularly love these two lines:

Maybe there is no should.

and

It’s all right to be afraid, as long as you do it anyway.

I was thinking almost the same thing (about life in general) not even an hour ago, although you've said it much better than I ever have. Seeing it from Beckett's point of view makes me really happy.

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rae714 November 21 2011, 05:29:14 UTC
Even though I was so busy this weekend and extremely tired I just couldn't stop reading this! So so good!

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