FF: Bleach

[murderouslowlow]

Title: A Taicho Returns
Author: Lizzie aka murderouslowlow
Genre: WHUMMPAAAAAGEEE/Action/Drama
Pairing(s): Nope. No pairings for Hitsu
Rating: PG13+
Warnings: Hitsu gets hurt a lot? lol.
Disclaimer: Not mine! All Kubo Tite's! I'm just playing in his sandbox when he's not watching. *CACKLE*
Summary: It's been three years since he had gone into the war

Comments

[helloshoe]

You are impressively fast, I give you that. I agree, this was a good chapter, but it does show that you wrote it very quickly. Please be putting a bit more attention into individual sentences next time, ok, there are missing prepositions and stuff. Don't be so hasty! *is an ent :D*

[murderouslowlow]

Haha, thanks. I get so excited when I write. It's this urge. lololol.

Yaaaaaaah. I didn't like re-reading it to be honest. Ahaha. It mostly contained one/two/three liners and it peeved me off a bit. >.>

I'll try not to be hasty next time! :D I promise. Ahaha.

Thanks for the tips. I'm fairly new to this writing. So I'm really appreciating everything. =] *hugs*

PS: LOL at your pic.

[helloshoe]

I know >_< I don't write that often, but whenever I do I realize I have to proof-read it and it's such a CHORE. But it does make the end result better, so I force myself.

...properly checking where I post, though, is another matter entirely.

[murderouslowlow]

I guess I should start doing that. Read what I write. *nod* It would give me a better result and it'll make me feel giggly for some reason. lolol.

Why? *blinks*