Comments | murderouslowlow: FF: Bleach

murderouslowlow

FF: Bleach

Mar 25, 2008 22:52

Title: A Taicho Returns
Author: Lizzie aka murderouslowlow
Genre: WHUMMPAAAAAGEEE/Action/Drama
Pairing(s): Nope. No pairings for Hitsu
Rating: PG13+
Warnings: Hitsu gets hurt a lot? lol.
Disclaimer: Not mine! All Kubo Tite's! I'm just playing in his sandbox when he's not watching. *CACKLE*
Summary: It's been three years since he had gone into the war ( Read more... )

hitsugaya; fanfiction; bleach

Comments 2

And I strike again.... helloshoe March 25 2008, 23:12:10 UTC

There are some mistakes in this chapter, it doesn't flow as easily as the last one. Some sentences feel rather awkward, as if you where forcing them out before they were really ready, if you know what I mean? Where you being hasty again? :P ( ... )

Re: And I strike again.... murderouslowlow March 26 2008, 02:52:39 UTC

Actually, I've been frusturated about something. (School) so I think that would be the reason why its not easily written. I actually complained to a friend after posting it.

Lol. I should take my time with what I write. It would be hard, but I think I should do it.

Man, I envy you for studying Japanese. Although, I'm happy because your explaning I never knew. So thank you!

*cough* a bit skimpy. Haha.