Early Morning Departures III

[musclemuseum29]

Title: Early Morning Departures
Author: Stephie
Rating: NC-17 ?
Pairing: belldom
Disclaimer: Well they say it never happened...
Warning: Sex and swearing and violence.
Notes: Thanks everyone really, but especially xanium who beta'd this for me and put up with my shananningins and added some beautiful touches too. You're a gem : )

Comments

[anonymous]

“That’s all you’ll get.”
oooh dom is so evil!!

gah, there are so many parts i would quote but i'd be quoting the whole thing...love this!! can't wait for matt to stand up for himself and teach asshole dom a lesson!

[dolce_piccante]

shit, i wasn't logged in lol...that comment's from me

[musclemuseum29]

Baha, that's fine. I didn't know you could comment when you weren't logged in.. ha..
But thanks love.
Oh and for the p/w protected documents thing :D

[dolce_piccante]

pw protection is a wonderful thing, ey? :)

[problematique75]

I was so happy to see this update!:)

Oh god - this is breath taking!! And now I am convinced more than ever that Dom has a tail and horns hidden under that oh SO beautiful and charming exterior!!!

Great writing although the angry, abusive sex was quite disturbing to read. Yes, Matt is right - it has to stop ... and if he needs help - I am just FULL of ideas of how he can get back at that evil little devil!!

Looking forward to the next update:D

[musclemuseum29]

LOL, wish I was as happy to have updated this. Not only was I nervous about putting this up, but I had to put it up paragraph by paragraph- for some reason it wouldn't accept it as a massive chunk, kept leaving random parts out. *screams*
LOL, well... just to make sure, why don't you take Dom out for a bit and do a thorough check, make sure every things up to standard ;) Maybe teach him a lesson while you're at it.
Yeah, it was quite disturbing... but to me it'd be the only way Matt (in this story) could see that their relationship was fucked up.
I'm full of TWO ideas. Pathetic aint it. I just.. Part of me whats Matthew to have his turn, get all rough and violent, but another part thinks I should do it with more realism.. (damn the horny side of me)
*cough* next update...shit :P
You're a gem *hugs*

[musclemuseum29]

It didn't take long at all :P I took way longer on yours.
And thank you :)

[butter_cup01]

My god, woman...

*speechless*

That was so good. SO good. I can't believe Dom would be so harsh, so rough! But, I'll admit it, i completely loved it. I *really* felt for Matt in this one (i guess you like torturing him, too ;)).

The use of the bass drum was...alright, I'll say it...it was hot. Very much so. But at the same time, it was really heartbreaking =( And Matt's bleeding! Poor fellar. I thought Dom would feel bad after he'd finished, but he continued to be a bastard!

Gah--it was extremely well written, i just loved it, and i can't wait for more!

*hugs*

[musclemuseum29]

I do love torturing Matt :) (shame, shame shame :) )
I'm glad you liked the bass drum *grins* I just thought the idea of having sex over it would be way too hot to pass up- but the tear through the bassdrum tried to tone it done, bring reality into it.
Yeah, lol, but to Dom that's just how it's meant to be, he gets what he wants and Matt will never oppose to it...

Thanks love *hugs back* I love your comments, always so nice :)

[freebellamy]

wow... this was almost rape! Poor Matt, it's really painful to read this chapter.
He's right: this has to end.
great job, anyway *thumbs up*

[musclemuseum29]

I know; there's an extremely fine line between non-con. and consenual here. I didn't want to offend anyone either, so I hope its just boardering okay.
Thank you XD Matt will now perform an enticing strip tease for your kindness :P