New Fic: 8 Seconds of Separation - Prologue & Chapter 1

[muse_0f_fire]

Title:  8 Seconds of Separation, Prologue & Chapter 1
Author:  Cleo Calliope
Rating:  PG this part (will probably go up)
Pairing:  9/Rose, hints of 9/Rose/Jack
Summary:  The past - even a past that isn't supposed to exist any more - still has an impact on the present.

Disclaimer:  Do I look like RTD?

Author's Note:  Yes, I know.  I should be

Comments

[anonymous]

Oh wow. V.V. interesting. (Plus I'm a huge Susan fan so this is doubly great) Also it's lovely to hear you're still working on Precious flowers.

I think maybe your auto-correct changed "Thames" to "Themes" (I hate Auto-correct at the moment, it means my computer just won't deal with Latin HW) and possibly shutter should be shudder. But I'm nitpicking, I'm sorry, ever since i did that grammar course, it just happens and i can't control it.

It's a brilliant story. Thank you.

[muse_0f_fire]

Don't apologise! It's useful feedback which is something of a rarity. Grammar is my weak point, I'm well aware of that so having someone notice that kind of thing and actually *tell* me about it makes me a happy camper.

Auto-correct is a pain. I have problems with it all the time. Both when I'm working with Latin and when I have to use the technical language of archaeology, which it really has fits about. *sigh*

I love Susan, she doesn't appear as often as I'd like. I'm really glad you're enjoying this. Chapter 2 is close to completion and should be up soon. Chapter 5 of 'Precious Flowers' is underway after hitting a bit of a snag there for a while. But I think I've resolved the problem and am forging a head whenever my work permits me the time. *g*

[theotherwillow]

Already this is deeply brilliant. I love the direction you're going with it so far and your integration of the old series. Keep up the great work and post again soon!

[kazzy]

Really, really good! I was so disappointed when I got to the end of the chapter, because I just wanted to go one reading and reading.

Poor Doctor. I can imagine just how much it hurt to realise where he was and then to go searching and find nothing there, after becoming so very hopeful. I wonder what is really going on. Is Susan alive and there's some explanation as to why they can't find her, or think she doesn't exist? Or is the psychotherapy thing, which I don't buy? Or is it something else entirely? I can't wait to find out.

Really, really good work. I love it already!

[eruvadhril]

Oooo Gallifrey backstory! I like the explanation for the Granddaughter thing.
Poor Doctor! *hugs him* I like this story very much.