Comments | muse_0f_fire: FIC: Frozen

muse_0f_fire

FIC: Frozen

Jan 10, 2009 21:46

Title: Frozen
Author: Cleo
Website: Pica Pica

Rating: PG-13?
Fandom: Hogfather
Pairing: Susan Sto Helit/Jonathan Teatime
Summary: For Susan, the ghost of winter is too strong to fade with the passage of time.

Author's Note: This was written on a single evening, in a single sitting. I just had an image of Susan standing in the ( Read more... )

fanfic, hogfather

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muse_0f_fire February 7 2009, 21:45:02 UTC

Thanks! *g*

Also thank you for catching that little mistake. I've fixed it.

I'm working on other stories - even other stories in this fandom! *g*

peculiar_grace January 14 2009, 22:43:32 UTC

Bravo on a job well done! You have created a chillingly beautiful story and I am honored to have been your beta-reader! This is a solid well crafted work that you can definitely be proud of!

(And such wonderful editing! Goodness, you must have had great beta-readers! Lol...)

muse_0f_fire February 7 2009, 21:45:52 UTC

You did a wonderful job - so well that you may have caused your self a problem. I have every intention to making you beta more of my stuff... when I actually get anywhere with it that is. *g*

anonymous January 16 2009, 21:29:30 UTC

It's so hard to find any Susan/Teatime fanfiction, and when it comes to a good one... you can count them on one hand, seriously.

This was so good. I absolutely loved it - beautifully written.

[Though, I think his normal eye was yellowish (but I’m not completely sure).]

You should definitely write more ;)

Btw. what happened with your other Susan/Teatime story, which was posted a while ago? Are you going to continue it?

.faeliv

muse_0f_fire February 7 2009, 21:48:31 UTC

I'm so glad you like it. It was one of those things that pops into your head and won't go away until you write it. *g* I'm not sure about his eye - in the movie it was king of yellowish grey I think. I don't remember if it ever said in the book. I guess I'll have to reread it again to find out. What agony. *g*

I am still working on the other story. It's even finally acquired a title and I think I've figured out what I want to do with it. Now if RL will only give me a few moments to breathe I'll definitely get it written.