FIC: Bury My Lovely

[muse_0f_fire]

Well, I've been working on another Hogfather fic.  It's not done and it isn't betaed, but I thought I'd post the first bit and see what people think.

Title:   Bury My Lovely
Rating:   NC-17
Fandom:   Hogfather
Category:   Romance
Pairing:   Susan Sto Helit/Jonathan Teatime
Summary:   Who do you really hate, when your mind wants one thing

Comments

[ensign_amy]

Ack! This was brilliant (except for a few spelling errors, but like you said -unbetaed) - you captured both characters exceedingly well and for your first smutfic (though it can't really be called that, with all the emotion involved), it was fantastic. Love the realistic emotion. It really felt like the stages of a relationship where things are still new, and knowing Susan, she's not so sure she likes it ^_^. Plus, I've always thought God Help Me was the perfect song for this ship!

[puredeadthingy]

Hot! And real! Also, EA is immense.

I reaaaally liked Susan's rationale for Lobsang and Imp.

[she0who0shines]

Hi! I'm new to LJ, but I just wanted to say that your story is soooo cool. Any chance of an update anytime soon? I'd love some more!

[ehren_adler]

ho wow. you were able to get both susan's and teatime's minds into words very well here. goob job. I love it. I think you may have to write more.

Fantastic

[anonymous]

Just found this site and am so pleased to know that I am not the only one who feels this way about Teatime and Susan. You did an amazing job of capturing their three-dimensional characters and painting them across the page. Truly wonderful - thank you for your gift.