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Title : Of races and delusions
Beta : noir_sakura20
Genre : AU / Humor (failed) / Romance
Pairing : Yunjae
Length : One shot
Rating : PG-13
Summary : Kim Jaejoong was leading the race until something happened...
A/N: B-day fic to thepwahlove !
( “I can’t stop now! Not only him, but the others will pass me for sure!” the young man replied in frustration. )
Beta : noir_sakura20
Genre : AU / Humor (failed) / Romance
Pairing : Yunjae
Length : One shot
Rating : PG-13
Summary : Kim Jaejoong was leading the race until something happened...
A/N: B-day fic to thepwahlove !
( “I can’t stop now! Not only him, but the others will pass me for sure!” the young man replied in frustration. )
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Sorry, late reply): Was perched on the toilet bowl:D
*am disgusted at what i just said*
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Its so amazing, the way you described the race! I felt as if it was really happening!
When jaejoong hit the tires i was like O__O O__O O__O
Then I realised it was just a dream :D
I love the way changmin said maybe yunho was right in saying it was weird that he didnt get his morning popo!
And yunho, whining to minnie about not getting his morning kiss is <3
The way Jaejoong pouted and was mad at the end was so cute.
And yunho, boy, you are just so sweet!
“I promise that I won’t cause you another accident. I’ll let you win.”
My heart melted, and it melted more when yunho said he didnt mind being second :D
Unnie :D You just had to make Jae cheeky to Yunnie at the end :D I cracked up <3
Thanks for writing such an awesome fic for me, Unnie^^
I <3 you ~~
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Ofc, I wasn't going to kill Jae in a b-day fic haha xD
The whole morning kiss was something huh xD
I'm really glad you liked it, and, I know your b-day is in 4hours but I couldn't wait >.< !
Thanks for commenting too :3 <3
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bb, i love the plot(: i love that unexpected twist!
“It was a dream, Jae.”
“But it felt so real, so painful.”
LOL so all along jaejoong knew that it was just a dream but he still became angry with yunho? how adorable can he get?! hehe
the last line just sums up the competitive nature of jaejoong that appears throughout the fic so very well! and of course, no matter what, yunho'll always let him have whatever he wants(:
thankyou for writing something so amazing. i really love this :D
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I guess you're right, I didn't do it on purpose atc.
Thank you for saying it's amazing, you're really nice :) and thanks again for the huge help
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no worries! hehe it's my pleasure!
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Thank you ô.ô I'm really glad you found it cute :3
Oh and yeah, the dream was made to sound real hehehehe 8D
Thanks for reading :3
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Well good that he finally got his morning kiss <3
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HAHA THE SUSPENSE ISH HERE 8D
Yes! He did get the kiss! xD
Thank you for commenting :3
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LOL INDEED xDD Actually I cant watch the real races(and other stuff) I'd be OMFG OMFG everytime someone does something...and my blood pressure would raise <- okay very random.
<33333 LOL DBSK doing a car race would be so OSM xD too bad it was just a dream :/
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xDD I really love this. One awesome dream is awesome, lol.
Oh, this! “Don’t ‘baby’ me. I’m mad at you,” Jaejoong retorted without looking at him.
Gawd, I love how Jaejoong simply stated that he was mad at Yunho :’D
“As long as you win, I don't care being second,” his lover squeezed his hands with a smile. Had to be quoted as well, so much love :’)
Love this. <3
& happy birthday to the b-day girl! 8D
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I wasn't expecting you to read, otherwise I'd save you a spot ;-;
Hahaha the suspense 8D
I'm really happy you loved it, thank you :'3
Oh and thanks for reading :3
♥ you
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My internet came back in time (;
Anyway, need some more updates from you, woman! >8] Lol.
See you soon! :33
<33
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Well, I'm going to write less act so, sorry D:
See you Joanna ♥
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