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@ performers
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shiningtofu

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

[shiningtofu]

Thank you~ his friendship with Kris is nice!! Even if it makes me Google-fu EXO things a lot because I suck at knowing enough about them :(

[fawkes]

I don't know if I can offer any crit about characterization because I don't know the real that well. 8D;

What I can say is that I do love your Woohyun. He's sociable and easy to talk to, and before our muses interacted he's heard enough about him through what his friends say that he was interested in talking to him. Luckily he did and he hopes to be closer to his hyung. n___n

[namstar]

I'm glad you think so!! And I'm sorry we didn't get to do that scene x.x Internet and life, I guess, did not want us to watch that movie. Woohyun will definitely be around for Chanyeol whenever, though! And he's glad to be able to come across that way, and I'm happy he does now! ♥ They'll definitely bond more soon, I hope!

[lockpickey]

Your writing is perfect and Jinki is perfect. Oh and you're perfect too.

I could honestly leave you with this alone because I'm not sure how to elaborate on such perfection haha I mean, even your awkwardness with your muse and his own awkwardness as a muse comes across as so Jinki. Does that make sense? He's the typical case of flaws that make someone perfect. I'm sorry though I'm kind of biased toward the real so I'll always be a little spazzy when talking about him and perfect muses of him (i.e. yours). There isn't just awkwardness about him though, there's this genuine and almost painful (for me and Kibum anyway) concern that he always has inside him and that Kibum would seriously beat out of him if he was the type to do that sort of thing haha he may try one day though be prepared jk ;; I know every group's leader care a lot for their members but not like I feel Jinki does, and maybe not to such extent yet (because my freaking muse is never around) but I'm so glad to find that in your muse as well. God I could go on about him

[shiningtofu]

I'm.... seriously so touched right now! lmao. Especially with you being such a big fan and all, it makes me happy! It's been worrisome trying to figure out a good way to balance his awkward with his... leaderness, so I'm glad that it's been nothing that seems to overstep any boundaries with you or Kibum! And lmao! Just don't bruise the merchandise in visible places~!

Why would you think that? D: Seriously, the scene was great both times! Just being able to write Jinki with Kibum is nice for me, so it will always be welcome! You're definitely not a disappointment with it at all ♥

He's staying, he's staying!!! Put the knife away~ lmfao

[lockpickey]

Seems like the truth can sometimes touch instead of hurt~ XD There shouldn't be any boundaries (apart from the natural ones lol) between our muses, actually, but since we know the reals, I can totally understand your worry. It seems like there could be a small almost invisible barrier between the two, but honestly? It's their loss they don't know what they're missing out on XDD

Okay, just don't make me pull the knife out again. XD

[distinction]

Even though I've told you over a hundred times already how much I love your Woohyun, I'm not sure if I ever gave you like, proper crit or aything.. but then again, there's seriously nothing wrong with him. And from what I read here neither is with your Jinki so stop being so perfect with your muses e__e jk jk, carry on being awesome~ But anyway! I think it's a pretty well-known fact I'm biased towards you and Woohyun so I'm going to try to step aside from that and be ~professional

[namstar]

Get out with your praise, fruity~! I've got glasses on for professionalism right now. Only not. I don't wear any :(

I'm really glad to hear this every single time, honestly ;.; Like you already know, Woohyun wasn't my bias or anything so I had to do a lot to get him around and going and I'm so glad that he's been able to click with people like Key, obviously, because the friendship at its core keeps him going strong and it's awesome. And, likewise, it gave me you and you know I love ya~ ♥

Of course!!! I know that, for you and I, we get the important things done no matter what it takes, so for other things it's just... why stress it and worry when we're in different timezones? :( It's always good to work things out as best as we can! And I'm not going anywhere~!