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[springvoice]

@ idolbook
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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

I'd really appreciate critique since this is my first attempt at playing in the kpop fandom. Also, I haven't had the opportunity to scene with her yet which is why the option is left off, but hopefully that will be amended soon!

Alternatively, you can leave a screened response here.

[springvoice]

Thank you! I'm glad to hear that :) Bom is definitely quirky but I think that's a trait that comes up more with people she's familiar/comfortable with, but I'll definitely be mindful to let some more of her 4D-ness show through. I'd love to have Bom interact with Sunny some more since she's one of my bias from SNSD :)

[springvoice]

I think Sunny is the kind of person Bom would get along with really well, so I look forward to them talking more! And you're already doing justice to Sunny from what I can tell, so there's nothing to worry about on that part ♥

[articulates]

Even though I keep up with 2NE1, Bom is one of those elusive types so this crit is more praise than anything. ;;

If there's such a thing as having a basic grasp of a voice, your muse would be it. Despite them not talking often, there's never been a time when I went "Hmm?" or "Eh?" when she talks to him or playfully reprimands him because you're conscious of the line he has between joking and serious. That means that he's never been irked at her misunderstanding him. On that note! I'm glad you're aware of the fact that he jokes around and such. n_n I can't count the number of times misunderstandings have occurred due to a muse being unused to his serious joking and the fact that you caught it well made me really happy. u_u

I'm looking forward to sceneing with you. :> I hope we'll get to soon!

[springvoice]

Baww, thank you! Your comment makes me really happy n_n.

Truthfully when I first joined idolbook, YG muses were the ones I was most nervous about interacting with-- mostly because I was worried it would be difficult to try and play out a "predetermined" relationship naturally and assuming that the other mun/muse has the same feel of what the real's relationship may be like. But honestly, interacting with your Tabi feels really natural to Bom and I think it has to do with the fact that they seem to share the same type of humor which is how Bom understands when he's joking.

I always have fun whenever the two of them talk and I hope they'll get to scene some time soon! ♥

[articulates]

I'm glad! :3

Ahhh. I totally understand that! TOP has a lot of slate himself and re-integrating him into community life and with YG muses was not easy two years ago. Which is why I felt really guilty/scared for a while when he didn't talk to Bom for a while after she claimed. And because my comment reminded me! I'm also happy that you keep up with Big Bang even though you technically don't really have to. :> It makes for lack of awkward postponement in the future. And like I told you before, I'm ecstatic they're getting along amazingly well. n_n

I both hate and love Bom for introducing him to more emotes to torture people with. XD; Yes, sceneing must happen ASAP. ♥ But no rush, of course.

[springvoice]

I'm a Big Bang fan as well so I gladly follow the boys n_n And I think it helps add to playing Bom since she's known them for so long and would follow them closely as well. She's a Big Bang stan after all :P But ahh, there was nothing to feel guilty/scared about! Truthfully I should have been more active in my attempt to reach out to other muses but I was too chicken to u_u

Oh, I foresee many emote wars between the two in the future. And I do want sceneing ASAP! Unfortunately their schedules means waiting for a bit longer :C

[articulates]

Naaah, it's okay. :> As the one with the older muse, reaching out first would have (hopefully!) eased the anxiety on your end. ♥

Hehehe, he's enjoying his new one a lot. n_n Ah yes, very unfortunate... However, I'm also open to scenes that don't involve physical meet-ups, etc.

[springvoice]

It definitely did! Truthfully I was a bit unsure of staying at idolbook at first, but after their interaction that thought definitely changed n_n

Oh, I didn't realize that was an option... ehheh my newness is showing! But I'm definitely open to sceneing things outside of physical meet-ups n_n

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........... ;_; You really would have left?

Is it different in the fandom you were in? :o With TOP, I never got the chance to scene other things but with my other muses, I've done phonecall scenes, webcam scenes, etc.

[springvoice]

I was nervous that I didn't fit in ;____;

And yeah, it was definitely different! Scenes weren't really done unless they were physical interactions; otherwise interaction through things like phones/ computers/ etc were just like message board replies.

[articulates]

... WELL NOW YOU KNOW. 8| No leaving!!!!!!

Ah, how strange. ._.; You get more points for adjusting so well... Nonetheless! I'll be more than happy to set something up with you. n_n

[springvoice]

I don't plan on it!!! You're stuck with me for now :P

Yeah, now that I think about it it does seem kind of strange :|a But yes! It will be done n_n I look forward to it!