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[sosohyorish]

@ Barbuddha
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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

[unlimit]

I don't feel I know enough about the real to give any crit on her characterization, but I have gotten the vibe that's she's a friendly, laid back person despite her status in the industry, and I see that reflected in your muse. Thank you for having her reach out to Minho! Hyori has made herself accessible and easy to talk to, which has helped him feel more at home, and I'm hoping to have him reach out to her in turn as soon as I have the time for it.

[sosohyorish]

I was glad they did get to talk that once, even if it was only briefly! It'll be nice to have them talk again, once things settle down for you.

[sosohyorish]

They really haven't, have they? I caught myself wondering once just how she'd come to 'collect' him and put him on her twitter :-P Even though they haven't talked much he still seems like a sweet guy, and she's enjoyed their conversations as well. She'll always be there to help, anytime he needs it.

[sosohyorish]

I'm not complaining either. He's been fun to talk to. I think the first time she took notice I think he was talking about masterbation, of all things. She was kind've all "...wtf what is this on my twitter feed." But in a way he's been a blessing.. being able to help him through something helped her feel more confident in herself in a time when her self-esteem was really lacking.

[lockpickey]

Oh man this is a good chance to apologize a million times for failing that scene with you. I swear we'll make up for it, I really do .__. Mostly because it has lots of potential of being really fun and I don't want to miss out on it.

Now I really like Hyori. I've always liked the real and your muse feels a lot like her, even though I don't know much of her personality. I think that some circumstances that she goes through in her life as a muse do tend to unbalance her, but that's just normal. Our muses are meant to be real people, so naturally they'll have the weaknesses that real people have. I want to get to see more of her playful side, as we got to sometimes, and I hope Key can elicit it from her. I also hope they can grow closer and become really good friends, even more than I already consider them to be.

[sosohyorish]

She really does enjoy talking to your Key, so I'm glad to see he enjoys her company as well. Things seem to be evening out for her now too, so I think she'll be much more chipper from now on.

[sosohyorish]

I find her incredibly hard to talk to. And I say this for two main reasons

[sosohyorish]

I'm really, really sorry she comes across that way. Since you're anon I really can't guess at who you are or reference specific instances

[sosohyorish]

Not the original poster, but I agree on the part about how she always finds a way to mention her boyfriend and things about him that only roughly relate to the topic at hand. Personally, for me, it wasn't just the one time when it seemed like she might be in a mood which makes it difficult to connect to new people, as it occurred with not only one, but two of my muses in different homes in the past. It also, for me!!!, makes me want to not continue feeding the conversation with my talkative muses because I'd be paranoid that she'd find a way to relate it to her boyfriend; however, my muses simply frowned in confusion and shrugged it off when it happened in the beginning. After a while, it almost makes them borderline desperate to find something requiring them to leave, or even ask her boyfriend-oriented questions to see if that'd lessen the chance for a repeat mention later in the conversation. They both will continue to talk to her, though, and hope it doesn't occur as much. Simply adding this because it appears to be character-

[sosohyorish]

DA... I don't understand the issue with people mentioning their significant others in general? It's never occurred to me that it would be somehow not okay, since IRL everyone I know who's married, engaged, in a long term relationship, they all mention their SOs very regularly as a natural part of conversation. (Similarly, I don't understand the problem with teenaged/early 20s muses talking about sex and dating and hot guys/girls all the time because from when I was in middle school all the way through college, that's what... everyone seemed to talk about the most... returning to it over and over, and it wasn't anything remarkable? Humans tend to be obsessed with sex, and especially at that age, so how would muses be any different?)

[sosohyorish]

It wouldn't be so bad if it wasn't CONSTANT. Like every once in a while is fine, or even regularly mentioning them, but it's gotten to the point where it's like "HEY DID YOU KNOW I HAVE A BOYFRIEND? GUESS WHAT I HAVE A BOYFRIEND, YOU SHOULD REALLY CARE THAT I HAVE A BOYFRIEND MY WHOLE LIFE REVOLVES AROUND HAVING A BOYFRIEND". I know very few people who can't go a single conversation without mentioning their SO. It's really annoying because honestly, nobody cares. Maybe if you're really close, but otherwise, it just comes off as needy and off-putting