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[pirouettes]

@ Ringbak
pirouettes

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

[pirouettes]

First of all I want to say that I don't know much about the real at all so I don't think I can say much about how IC he is. He seems like a social butterfly in the sense he goes back and forth between a lot of friends. Which isn't much of a problem, really because I cheer on social muses! In his case its like he's a bit superficial as far as friendships go. He's nice and outgoing but he appears as if he could leave in a heart beat, if you get what I mean? It made it hard for my muse to get close to him, which I found a shame because other than that he's fun and refreshing! Again, I don't know if the real is like that, but I felt like telling you anyway and I hope it can be helpful in some way? ^^;

[pirouettes]

I can definitely see where you're coming from with this anon, and it was something I was concerned about. It's very helpful and I'm very glad you pointed it out, so thank you! I think part of him is worried about going too deep with people and because he's scared they'll see something they don't like and they'll leave him. He also feels like it's his job to keep everything light and wonderful, cause people will be disappointed in him if he shows his mopey side. I think all of that kinda turned him into too much of a friendship-on-the-surface guy. So I really, really appreciate the feedback and we will work on it! I hope our muses can still interact and become friends. ♥ He really does adore the people he talks to.

[kkwonnie]

This is pretty useless but I am really glad Joon and Kwon talk more these days! He's really sweet and fun, and I hope they can get closer. I feel like there's quite a few stuff they could talk about and possibly relate to, and some layers to him that I'm starting to see and it's interesting! Kwon tends to get like... freakishly hyper around some people, and Joon is one of them, and sometimes I worry that would keep them from getting closer beyond like... two happy goons. XD If that makes any sense OTL So I hope as they continue to talk you can see more from Kwon than just "KGPAGAJG HYUNG HI" and they could get closer. That's something I'll work on!

[pirouettes]

I think the two of them are hilarious together in their strange way. ♥ Sometimes Joon's a little too hesitant to go past the surface because he doesn't want people to think he's trying to get attention by moping publicly or asking for too much help. But I think the plug.dj thing was really good for them because it helped them recognize that there are those deeper sides to each other. But I absolutely adore every time they talk and I'm so glad they're friends!!

[aigoo]

I'd like to be able to offer some sort of crit., but not being that familiar with the real it's difficult. From what I've seen of the real, and of your muse, you really seem to balance him well. While the majority of the time he is loud and (lovingly) obnoxious ♥ it's also been wonderful to see another side of Changsun when they've spoke one-on-one recently. In contrast to the first anon, I will say that he seems very committed to developing deeper relationships and that's been evident through watching these two grow and in the concern he's shown over their mutual friends. These things take time, and despite how different our muses are, they've grown closer than I ever expected

[pirouettes]

I absolutely adore the friendship that has formed between these two, though it was slightly unexpected! I really appreciate you letting me know what you think, I'm so happy you feel that way. Changmin's grumpy responses really make me laugh and Changsun enjoys them just as much. I'm so glad these two have gotten close and their interactions are so much fun. Thank you for the comments, I appreciate you taking the time to make them. ♥