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articulates January 6 2013, 12:34:24 UTC
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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others* (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

*If you feel like giving input on my other muses too, please feel free. Alternative post here.

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moodmaking January 6 2013, 21:05:07 UTC
Just wanted to come in and say, I really do think your muse has changed in his playfulness and aegyo since we first met him. Although he's always been a teaser, I can tell now he cares for Dara and shows through his actions and words and being far too cute, which... I think is very characteristic of the real. My muse is still glad to have a dongsaeng like him.

As far as your other muse goes, there's a reason my muse has been more quiet towards her. u_u Sorry. Hopefully that'll change soon, because we still value that friendship, too!

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articulates January 7 2013, 05:40:52 UTC
I'm glad it shows. ♥ He's glad to have a noona like her (who drives him around whenever he likes n_n). He'll never stop caring for her.

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