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[chanhee]

@ cloudapp
chanhee

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)

➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)

➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

[jang]

this is the part where i'm going to be genuinely unhelpful in providing any help with your characterization of him, but that's only because i think he deserves some praise in being a really comfortable muse to talk to through both twitter and aim and while these two still haven't had a chance to hang out (my fault, sorry), i think want to say thank you for that much. i'm glad you brought him back around within dongwoo's eyesight because he loves the little squirt when they can actually catch one another.

[firstkiss]

I don't feel right doing these for any of you since we haven't been back around for very long, but you said you were worried about him. I've never gotten to play against a Chanhee before so I can't compare against a better or worse muse, and they haven't interacted much, but honestly I think you're doing a great job! Maybe you were messing up before and have reeled him back in recently? He comes across very in line with the real, but I'll admit there could be some bias because I'm happy just to finally get to play against one. But seriously, I think you're playing him well, especially when comparing to the real's recent activity on twitter. I'm sorry I can't comment more but once they've had the chance to interact more often and build a better relationship, maybe I'll have more useful input.

[chanhee]

Hey, thanks for the feedback! I'm slightly worried that he came across as obnoxious and cold (their first conversation didn't start off well imo) because that's the one thing that I would like to avoid having since the reals are really close to one another. Their dynamics is something that we should work on definitely, and no pressure what so ever, we've got plenty of time for that, haha. No need to be sorry, we're really looking forward to their further interaction. o/

[firstkiss]

We played our own part in that and it didn't come across as cold or obnoxious at all! But we'd absolutely be happy to work on their dynamic, of course! I still have a lot of work to do on Byunghun so hopefully it will all come together with a little time.

[yeors]

Hello there. ♥

Chanhee appears to be a fun-loving deviant, though still personable to anyone--it's hard to not like such a boyish charm! He's the type of guy Sungyeol would love to be hanging around more often, simply from his positive energy, and well, they just have that potential to do spontaneously odd things. He's very easy to get along, even in brief chats and comments. I hope they get more chances to play together.

[chanhee]

Hello hello ^^ He's a deviant and boyish I agree, haha! I'm glad that shows. I know that the reals are quite close to the point that Chunji has no problem hitting the older Sungyeol e_e but yeah, here's hoping for more chances to play together too!

[yeors]

Yes! I heartily agree. I'm glad you recognize the friendship, because I've been meaning to slide that in, but somehow found myself in an awkward dance of do or don't. orz

[chanhee]

haha, don't hesitate to point anything out really. We're glad to have the chance to play with you again. ~_~ !

[yeors]

Me too! I'm pleasantly surprised by you. Had no idea until recently. orz so sorry I didn't recognize earlier.

[chanhee]

lol Don't apologize!