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Feb 14, 2006 23:37

Title: Revenge by Any Other Name
Chapter Title: Where One Begins
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters: Harry/Pansy (eventually)
Prompt: #01 - Beginnings
Word Count: 2157
Rating: PG/PG-13
Summary: During a war, the line between enemy and ally is blurred.
A/N: All prompts from fanfic100 will be used in order (unless otherwise stated) to create this universe. ( Read more... )

Comments 14

Very nice! carolientje February 15 2006, 09:51:34 UTC

Just wanted to let you know that I really really liked this story! I've never before read serious stories with these two in it together, but I must say that it's really really nice, this one! Love it!

Re: Very nice! _fullofgrace February 17 2006, 06:27:43 UTC

Thank you!! Considering this is only my second time delving into Harry/Pansy, your comments rock my boat. lol Thank you again for the feedback. I hope to have the second (and possibly third) parts this story up by the end of the weekend.

seaislewitch February 15 2006, 14:09:37 UTC

Nicely written; I enjoyed it.

I love your depiction of Pansy!

_fullofgrace February 17 2006, 06:28:30 UTC

Thank you! I very rarely write Pansy so it's always nice to hear she's not completely OOC. I hope to have the second (and possibly third) parts this story up by the end of the weekend.

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_fullofgrace February 17 2006, 06:28:50 UTC

Thank you! I hope to have the second (and possibly third) parts this story up by the end of the weekend! :)

fanfictionfan February 15 2006, 16:08:49 UTC

I'm already hooked. What an intriguing start! I think you did a wonderful job with both Pansy and Harry. I can't wait to read more.

_fullofgrace February 17 2006, 06:29:33 UTC

Thanks so much! H/P is definitely something new for me, but I'm enjoying writing them. I hope to have the second (and possibly third) parts this story up by the end of the weekend!

carpe_slytherin February 15 2006, 16:22:36 UTC

This is a terrific start! Pansy is so in control and graceful, exactly as I imagine a Slytherin woman growing to be, and Harry strikes such a great balance between suspicious and bewildered. I'm looking forward to more and I'm a pretty dedicated slasher. You're just that good.

_fullofgrace February 17 2006, 06:30:56 UTC

Pansy is so in control and graceful, exactly as I imagine a Slytherin woman growing to be...

It gives me warm and fuzzies to know I was able to pull that off. :)

Thanks so much for your feedback and I hope to have the second (and possibly third) parts this story up by the end of the weekend!