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Revenge By Any Other Name (Where One Goes Home) - Harry/Pansy - 9/?

Jul 09, 2006 11:47

Series Title: Revenge by Any Other Name ( Read more... )

Comments 12

aequitate July 9 2006, 16:51:52 UTC

wow, that was amazingly written. I read the previous chapters before and never taken the time to leave a comment, but really all that I have to say is that I absolute love this fic. I just love how you portray harry and pansy and the fact that their relationship wasn't rushed into them falling in love or even becoming friend. Rarely nowadays you see that. Most fanfic author tends to make the two main characters fall in love instantly by the first few chapters. So hopefully you'll write soon because that be like awesome.

_fullofgrace July 10 2006, 00:06:05 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you decided to review this plot bunny of mine. :) And I'm glad to hear the slower pace of the relationship is a welcomed change because it's hard to find a good medium between rushing it and drawing it out. Thanks again for the feedback! :)

bk03 July 9 2006, 17:10:38 UTC

You did a nice job with the "horcrux cliché." Its not so much that you do it, but how you do it.

The best part of this story is how you're slowly evolving the Harry/Pansy relationship. They've gone from barely being able to work together, to having (small) moments of actually caring about the other.

How does the prompt table work? You're going to write a chapter for each prompt or just a certain number of them?

_fullofgrace July 10 2006, 00:09:57 UTC

You did a nice job with the "horcrux cliché." Its not so much that you do it, but how you do it.

Thanks! I pondered with other ways to do this simply because I wanted to avoid the cliche but I finally just sucked it up and went for it. Glad to hear it's working. I'm also glad to hear the slow evolution of the pairing is working. I really wanted to avoid the sudden "OMG I LOVE YOU" kind of thing. lol

How does the prompt table work? You're going to write a chapter for each prompt or just a certain number of them?The original idea was to take the 100 prompts from the table and make an epic multi-parter, using each prompt in numerical order as chapters. But then I realized I was insane for even wanting to write a 100 part fic, and then when writing this chapter, I realized it was harder to stick with the prompt themes as they were numbered. So now I'm just taking random prompts from the table for each chapter. As for the number of prompts, if I was a betting woman, I would say this chapter marks the halfway mark of completion ( ... )

1grl_revolution July 9 2006, 22:07:47 UTC

Very nice. :) I can't wait for more.

_fullofgrace July 10 2006, 00:10:25 UTC

Thank ya! My muse is on a roll so hopefully I'll have another chapter up relatively soon.

madderbrad July 11 2006, 02:51:16 UTC

Great chapter, written very well, leaving me wanting MORE every time I read a new one.

They should *prove* that Harry's the horcrux by repeating the spell from another location, yes? At the moment it's still their assumption.

_fullofgrace July 16 2006, 21:37:08 UTC

They should *prove* that Harry's the horcrux by repeating the spell from another location, yes?

You're thinking like my inner!Hermione. Expect that to come up in the next chapter actually. :)

pleasingwords July 17 2006, 02:42:13 UTC

Yum. I wanted to read your story for a while but never got around to it until a few days ago. I love it. :D

_fullofgrace July 22 2006, 01:24:46 UTC

I'm glad you finally got a chance to check out this little plot bunny of mine! I should hopefully have a new chapter up by the end of the weekend. Thanks again for your feedback!