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Revenge By Any Other Name (Where One Takes a Risk) - Harry/Pansy - 10/?

Jul 29, 2006 14:13

Series Title: Revenge by Any Other Name
Chapter Title: Where One Takes a Risk (10/?)
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters: Harry/Pansy
Prompt: #86 - Choices
Word Count: 4973
Rating: PG/PG-13
Summary: Pansy expected the risk of getting caught, but this is very different.

( Pansy stared at him for a moment, not even sure how to respond to that. If she had been standing here with her husband showing this sort of concern for her well-being, she would have smiled, would have gently touched his cheek, would have placed a simple kiss on his lips before assuring him that she would be just fine. )

Comments 24

1grl_revolution July 29 2006, 19:27:32 UTC

Eeeeeee!

That was great. When's the next part gonna be done? *is impatient* ;)

Wow. This story just gets better and better. *g*

_fullofgrace July 29 2006, 20:51:04 UTC

heeee *pets you being all impatient*

This chapter has actually been finished for over a week. *looks shifty* But it took me this long to get to a point where I actually cared for it...lol Hopefully the muse and I will be more in-sync with the next so it'll be up sooner.

*is thrilled you're liking this plot bunny gone wild of mine*

bk03 July 30 2006, 00:26:57 UTC

The banter between Hermione and Pansy was great. Even without Harry, I can see these two women not liking each other. Loved Ron's line about how why the spell was taking so long.

Looking forward to seeing what else you do, especially now the Harry and Pansy have given in to whatever is between them.

_fullofgrace August 12 2006, 00:23:47 UTC

The banter between Hermione and Pansy was great.

I think I enjoyed writing them catfighting a bit too much...lol Thanks again for taking the time to read and leave feedback! Hopefully, I'll have the next chapter out soon!

aequitate July 30 2006, 01:10:33 UTC

wow, that was like awesome. I love the characters interaction, its really well written I must say. BTW, even though Blaise is not like the main characters I kind of like how you wrote him. I sorta of feel pity for the poor guy, with his wife betraying him and all. Well I hope you write more soon.

_fullofgrace August 12 2006, 00:25:58 UTC

Thanks! :) I'm glad to hear I wrote Blaise well enough for you to feel sorry for him. I was really hoping to get across that he's reallt NOT this horrible guy, he's just doing what's been expected of him since he was a kid. Glad I was able to get it to come across a bit. Thanks again for the feedback!

dracosltlsecret July 30 2006, 03:32:59 UTC

very nice!

_fullofgrace August 12 2006, 00:26:10 UTC

Thank you! :)

trying_to_say July 31 2006, 03:01:40 UTC

love it!

_fullofgrace August 12 2006, 00:26:28 UTC

Thanks! Hopefully, the next part will be up soon!