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Company in Solitude

Jul 08, 2004 00:34

Title: Company in Solitude
Author: Tonya (tigerlily1998hotmail.com)
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: No own. No sue. Just borrowing from the much more talented JK Rowling.
Pairing: Harry/Luna
Summary: Harry seeks solitude and finds the opposite.
A/N: Written for cantinera for the HP Het Ficathon. Requirements included Ron and Hermione talking, Harry being slightly ( Read more... )

Comments 7

spiffariffic October 1 2004, 17:12:15 UTC

I like your characterization of Luna in this one.

She gave him a curious look as if she didn't quite know what she had done that deserved thanks.

Very nice. Makes it seem more like comforting others is a natural part of her character, not something she has to struggle to do.

I like this idea of the origin of the butterbeer cap necklace, too, and it being a source of comfort to Luna.

"Well of course not. A necklace would look strange on you, Harry," she replied seriously.
A nice little bit of humor. I do enjoy it when people do a good job of writing Luna-not-quite-understanding-what-people-mean.

museinmotion October 2 2004, 07:57:57 UTC

You were on a fic reading roll...lol Whcihc heck who am I to complain as the author. Thanks again for reading and responding!

After finishing OotP, I always wondered why exactly Luna would be wearing that necklace. Maybe it's just me, but I just think there's something that JKR isn't telling us so that we just believe it's another one of Luna's oddities and not something important. Then again, I could be reading more into this than I should...lol

Thanks again for the feedback!

lira_snape August 1 2006, 21:01:43 UTC

Very interesting and original piece! :) I liked it!

_fullofgrace August 12 2006, 00:41:55 UTC

Thank you! :)

evrlastinggaze May 5 2008, 01:03:28 UTC

A beta of mine recommended this story, saying it would help my writing [I'm very green, or a newb(?)]. I was very impressed by how well you were able to capture the scenes with such effeciency. Paragraph to paragraph it went so smoothly, and the pacing was excellent.

Much thanks/praise from a newbie. ^( '-' )

_fullofgrace June 24 2008, 23:00:01 UTC

This was actually my very first Harry/Luna piece so it thrills me to know that I pulled it off well. Thank you again for taking the time to leave feedback!

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_fullofgrace May 29 2009, 01:51:04 UTC

Thank you for the feedback. This was my first attempt at Harry/Luna back in the day so your critique means a lot. Thanks again for taking the time to read and leave feedback! :)