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Love to Touch (Hermione/Draco)

Oct 17, 2004 00:10

Title: Love to Touch
Author: Tonya (tcooksey@gmail.com)
Disclaimer: No own. No sue.
Pairing: Draco/Hermione
Rating: R (smut alert)
Summary: Follow up to “Love to Watch”. Hermione knows she can’t do this anymore.

( Everyone was engaged in some form of conversation. Everyone with the exception of Draco Malfoy. )

Comments 8

catchmelike October 16 2004, 22:30:03 UTC

Awesome Tonnie. Just awesome. I think you really conveyed Hermione's emotions well. Especially at the end. She says it's going to end, but it's still not perfectly clear that it's not. We know she's obviously said that before, so does she really mean it this time? It's left open, and I really love that.

Of course, I always love your style. Very good. I think you write both Draco and Hermione very well.

_fullofgrace October 16 2004, 22:33:01 UTC

Thanks Toppie. I'm glad the open ending worked. I was feeling iffy about it. *hugs*

kataclysmic March 13 2005, 01:47:44 UTC

Why didn't I know you written this before now?

*dies*

This was fabulous. I loved it. You need to write lots, lots, lots more D/Hr.

Oooh, I did like it. Yay.

_fullofgrace March 13 2005, 03:57:13 UTC

Yay! Yet another seal of approval! I'm on a roll tonight...lol

Thanks so so so so so much for the feedback. Gives my DHr muse a much needed ego boost to write more often. *huggles*

cherii_emrei March 14 2005, 01:42:47 UTC

Ditto with kataclysmic, you need to write more!!

This is so great! Yo're really good at capturing those moments, of writing their history without losing focus. It's a glimpse into their world. Imagine what would happen if you wrote more than a glimpse? :)

I'm not entirely sure how I feel about Hermione finally leaving Draco. On one hand, she always does this every couple of weeks, and she did leave her underwear with him. However, there's a hint of finality. You always do this to me!!

Write more!!

_fullofgrace March 14 2005, 05:36:08 UTC

Actually this (and the prequel) were originally meant to be part of a tirlogy. I'm still not sure if I'm gonna follow through on that, but I just might now that you guys are giving the muse a good kick in the rear...lol

(And eventually I *do* want to tackle more of an epic DHr fic)

cherii_emrei March 14 2005, 18:05:21 UTC

Trilogy?? *kicks muse in the rear*
If you wrote more D/Hr I'd be happy. Trilogy or epic, which to choose?? :D

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_fullofgrace November 26 2005, 03:39:33 UTC

How did this review slip by me???!!!

Thank you for the feedback! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this as much as I did writing it! :-)