Sleeping with Ghosts - Draco/Hermione - 1/1

Mar 18, 2005 23:38

Title: Sleeping With Ghosts
Author: Tonya (_fullofgrace)
Pairing: Draco/Hermione
Rating: PGish
Disclaimer: I own it. I own it all! Actually, no I don’t. So no own, no sue please.
Summary: Funny how things change when you’re not looking…
A/N: Uber thanks to kataclysmic for making me a DHr whore back in the day (and convincing me to venture into writing them) and ( Read more... )

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museinmotion March 19 2005, 06:21:11 UTC
Thank you, and thanks for pointing out the Hermione thing. I have issues at time un-Americanizing things. I couldn't think of another way to word that and still keep it liked I wanted so i just went with that. Glad you liked even with my Americanization. ;-)

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_fullofgrace March 19 2005, 06:37:39 UTC
I made a slight change that will hopefully smooth that out a bit cause it's been irking me...lol

She had simply clenched her fists at her side and uttered a simple, straightforward request. "Fucking grow up already." And with that, she had turned on her heels and gone off to return to her previous crying.

Something about hearing the usually prim and proper Hermione Granger use profanity he hadn't even realized she had known had made him realize how many lines he had crossed that night. So later that night, he had shown up on her doorstep, a need to apologize or at least get in a "Weasley bloody started it" before things got out of hand.

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takarakanashi March 19 2005, 06:24:22 UTC
I liked it... sad and poignant... I have to say that I agree with the comment about Hermione's choice of language... but maybe it's just the choice of words when we're truly hurting that sets us apart.

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museinmotion March 19 2005, 06:32:44 UTC
Thank you...and after thinking about it a bit more, I made a slight change that hopefully doesn't make that stick out like a sore thumb as much...

She had simply clenched her fists at her side and uttered a simple, straightforward request. "Fucking grow up already." And with that, she had turned on her heels and gone off to return to her previous crying.

Something about hearing the usually prim and proper Hermione Granger use profanity he hadn't even realized she had known had made him realize how many lines he had crossed that night. So later that night, he had shown up on her doorstep, a need to apologize or at least get in a "Weasley bloody started it" before things got out of hand.

Thanks again for the feedback!

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aquagals March 19 2005, 06:26:56 UTC
It's been years since I've read any Potter fic, and this just rocks my little socks, yo. You might just make a closet Hermione/Draco girl at of me.

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_fullofgrace March 19 2005, 06:36:16 UTC
*pulls you further to the darkside*

We have punch and pie here! Join us, won't you? *innocent look*

And thank you for the feedback! Makes my day. :)

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aquagals March 21 2005, 02:09:17 UTC
Pie, huh? Hmmm...

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crimsonstars_ March 19 2005, 07:57:29 UTC
Hmm. This is the 2nd fic that I've read where Harry dies, and I hate to say it, but I think they're just a little bit better when Harry dies. Not that I want Harry to die, but they're all written so well!

Anyway, this was an excellent fic. Beautifully written and just awesome. ^^ Can't wait to read more D/Hr from you! :)

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_fullofgrace March 19 2005, 15:44:57 UTC
*looks shifty* Between you and me (and I suppose anyone else with eyes), I love Harry dearly, I do but I like writing him dead for some odd reason if he's not like part of the main pairing. Don't know why.

Thanks for the feedback!!:)

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kataclysmic March 19 2005, 13:10:31 UTC
*loves*

This was perfect, and just what I meant when I suggested the inspiration.

I like the way Draco is convincing himself he doesn't mind Hermione's not thinking of him, And he'd oblige because sex was still sex after all, even if only one of them was thinking of the other in the end of all things because we all know sex is never just sex with D/Hr *g*

*loves*

*pimps everywhere on your behalf*

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_fullofgrace March 19 2005, 15:47:25 UTC
This was perfect, and just what I meant when I suggested the inspiration.

Good thing you and my muse were on the same wavelength cause I stared at that challenge for a second and then suddenly a light went off...lol

Thank you muchly for the feedback and the pimping! You're my pimp apparently. *goes to get you a pimp cane and a big floppy hat*

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kataclysmic March 19 2005, 16:44:11 UTC
Um, for some reason I now have an intense desire to make an icon of Lucius and his cane and biiiiiiiiiig floppy hat *g*

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