A Little Compensation, PG-13peskywhistpawAugust 7 2011, 00:58:00 UTC
I ruin nice things. *hides*
Lily liked to talk with her hands on her hips. She probably thought it made her look stern - which, to be fair, it had done when they were eleven, but the effect had worn down a bit over the years, and now only gave James an excuse to ogle her curves.
“Potter,” she said, looking down at the multicolored, eight-scoop ice cream cone he had cajoled the house-elves into gifting him, “I think you’ve taken the idea of phallic compensation a little too far - even by your standards.”
James was prepared for this. “I’d hardly call it compensation. More like an accurate representation.”
He winked at her, and was sure he could see a blush forming on her cheeks, when Sirius let out a loud guffaw. James shot a scowl toward the sound, but it was too late. Any and all blushes on Lily’s face stopped in their tracks, making it so that she just looked particularly lively as she smirked at him.
“Someone disagrees,” she practically purred in amusement. “And I suppose he’d know, wouldn’t he
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Re: A Little Compensation, PG-13museme87August 7 2011, 04:36:33 UTC
Oh I loved this!! It seems like insulting James' manhood is a running theme thus far in the fest, the poor dear. :) Sirius was awesome here--mischievous and willing to throw his best friend under the bus for a laugh. I approve of any and all James/Sirius ear nibbles, platonic or otherwise. Lily and James' interactions were well done as well. I don't think you've ruined a thing!
Re: A Little Compensation, PG-13starry_laaAugust 7 2011, 09:29:07 UTC
Lol, this is fantastic! I love how you took the prompt and truly ran away with in! Comparing a stacked ice cream cone to ~male bits~ who would have thought?! I loved Sirius here, biting James' ear, much to Liky's amusement. And I loved the end line! <3
Re: A Little Compensation, PG-13con_spireAugust 7 2011, 15:19:59 UTC
AUGH YOU. The mental image of Sirius ear-biting. I am now frustrated. AUGH.
But seriously, this is hilarious. (My propensity for phallus jokes notwithstanding) I adore your portrayal of Lily, very sassy and sexy. All too often she's cast as the prude, so this is refreshing. <3 Good job!
Re: A Little Compensation, PG-13peskywhistpawAugust 7 2011, 15:45:25 UTC
LOL!
I'm really glad you enjoyed this, thank you! I imagine Lily started out quite prudish, but quickly got over it, as no doubt the Marauders delighted in using her prudishness to their advantage, haha. And now she can turn it back around on them.
Lily liked to talk with her hands on her hips. She probably thought it made her look stern - which, to be fair, it had done when they were eleven, but the effect had worn down a bit over the years, and now only gave James an excuse to ogle her curves.
“Potter,” she said, looking down at the multicolored, eight-scoop ice cream cone he had cajoled the house-elves into gifting him, “I think you’ve taken the idea of phallic compensation a little too far - even by your standards.”
James was prepared for this. “I’d hardly call it compensation. More like an accurate representation.”
He winked at her, and was sure he could see a blush forming on her cheeks, when Sirius let out a loud guffaw. James shot a scowl toward the sound, but it was too late. Any and all blushes on Lily’s face stopped in their tracks, making it so that she just looked particularly lively as she smirked at him.
“Someone disagrees,” she practically purred in amusement. “And I suppose he’d know, wouldn’t he ( ... )
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(I was mostly worried because the picture of the ice cream looks so lovely and whimsical, and then I write this. XD)
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But seriously, this is hilarious. (My propensity for phallus jokes notwithstanding) I adore your portrayal of Lily, very sassy and sexy. All too often she's cast as the prude, so this is refreshing. <3 Good job!
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I'm really glad you enjoyed this, thank you! I imagine Lily started out quite prudish, but quickly got over it, as no doubt the Marauders delighted in using her prudishness to their advantage, haha. And now she can turn it back around on them.
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