Fic: In the line of fire (N)

[dreaminthepast]

Title: In the line of fire (N)
Author: Sev-chu
Pairing: Jaejoong x Changmin, Yunho x Junsu (Yunho x ofc) Yoochun x ofc(s)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Mob wars are painting the streets of Hong Kong and Japan red with blood ensnaring the rogue cop in its wake. Can Yunho find him in time to save him and is he ready for what he finds? Can the gangs unite to

Comments

[oonmyeong]

for my liking in this fic there's too much hosu and so little jaemin D:

[dreaminthepast]

Best not read the next chapter then.

[neoreulwonhae]

Oh my god, fantastic chapter! The first scene had my stomach doing flips, and the scene after that was just as intense, in a different way. XD

I knew Donghae was the spy! Ahhh, they need to catch him!

Great stuff, can't wait for more. :)

[dreaminthepast]

xD thank you so much! Just needed to sneak some JaeMin in there, couldn't resist. :D

Donghae is very bad. Hopefully they can be done with the Golden Dragon soon!

Will try to update soon! ♥

[anonymous]

Whoa! I walked into a wall of smut! (and i really really liked it^^V

[dreaminthepast]

Lol. I like a little shock value, but I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
I'm glad you are enjoying the emotion. Sometimes I struggle with it so I'm glad it's working out in this fic. ♥

HoSu.. hehe, I think you're right.

Ah, you're assuming Changmin knows about Donghae's secret goings-on.
Oooh something is going to happen indeed.

I think Yunho is always a little clueless. (and full of squishiness). It makes him special. ♥

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! I enjoy reading and responding to your comments/speculations. They always help to re-focus on the next chapter. Little things I prob. wouldn't have thought about before.

lol
♥♥
Sharyn.

[irene014]

I knew that there's something up with Donghae! ah since Yunho knows and also Junsu now anything can happen...

I wonder what Changmin will do now since Mickey captured one of the Golden Dragon *hmm*

I'm glad that HoSu relationship escalated & still I wonder about the JaeMin lust but damn its early to say but i love the porn in this chapter ^^;

[dreaminthepast]

;) Donghae is beginning to be found out! Don't think he expected HoSu to be making out in the basement like that. lol

*hmm*

Hm yes, Jaejoong finally has Changmin, now what is he going to do with him? (Besides sleep with him whenever possible).

I'm glad you are enjoying.
Thank you! <3

[dreaminthepast]

♥ I'm glad you love Min. He's just so many things as Jaejoong is finding out.

♥♥AW! Thank you!!

Lol, Junsu is SO secretly naughty. ;D

Lol, Donghae is getting eviler by the second. Yunho's good, Junsu will take care of him, although I'm starting to see this creepy pattern I have of putting Yunho in situations where he ends up hurt or bleeding...or almost if not dying.... um... I LOVE HIM I SWEAR! *hides*

Thank you so much. I know exactly how you feel. It took me so long to write this chapter because school was trying to kill me. I'm glad you have a little time to breath now though! (I hope). Take care of yourself, and don't worry about taking a long time to read them.

There will be more very soon. (Next chappie almost done!)
♥

[dreaminthepast]

:D Yup, that makes perfect sense. ... Attracted to the evil, you are...

lol, ok. Enough of that :P

I will! (no, that is most definitely not a happy feeling).