just some form of randomness...to take away the tears

[musicaltears07]

kinda short, havent been able to write anything decent lately..

sing me something sweet
just to sweep me off my feet
and let me lose myself
in the words of someone else
if it could take away the emptiness
and make me whole again,
drown me in the melodies
if it could take away the pain

Comments

[drummer_poet]

not bad, seems a bit rushed through, least it rhymes... everything i write doesnt flow or rhyme or anything...

[musicaltears07]

yeah, nothing ive written lately sounds right...

[drummer_poet]

*sigh* i wish i knew wut was wrong with me, i wrote that really good one cuz i was just bubbling over with emotion but now im calm and i cant write...

[musicaltears07]

yay for calmness, i miss that feeling.