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Oct 24, 2005 17:56

Running up and down up the streets.
Climbing what I cannot reach
Hitting things face first
To where i cannot see where it hurts.
Pacing in this place unknown.
Help Me! Help Me!
Before I can feel no more.

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partyhoss October 25 2005, 19:58:12 UTC
did you make that up?

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musicfan18 October 25 2005, 23:35:01 UTC
Yes

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partyhoss October 26 2005, 04:27:58 UTC
pretty good. I, like it

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luvingtohateu October 29 2005, 17:21:18 UTC
i think its beautiful Zac, it shows you, and i like you, thus i like this poem, very nicely written...

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