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Sep 23, 2005 06:09

Well I cant sleep and its my own fault ( Read more... )

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sullengirl September 24 2005, 18:06:16 UTC
wish i could hear your guitar, same thing happens when i write, bits and pieces start flying and its so good that you cant rush it. you cant push musical pieces to be together because they're beautiful or kick ass, it has to want to fit together, and you always know when it does. ive been writing a lot lately, and i always end up throwing the words away. it never justifies the soul of the music. i like your lyrics a lot, id like to hear the accompaniment

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musicismylife September 24 2005, 22:24:57 UTC
well, you should be able to hear it in a month or so. But yeah, I started writing this when I was trying to put together another song and I just started singing over it, now it doesnt fit the other, but this one has words now at least. heres the 2nd part I wrote it last night.

you were pretty, you were smart
you made me, you stole my heart
and I lost it
I had pride, I had esteem
but I could not believe
I could do this
I tried hard to make it seem
that I was better then you've seen
was it worth it
thought I found you, but I lost me
took so long to finally see
that I blew it
scared and lost I tried to hide
Shut my mouth and kept it inside
but you knew it
Now I'm tired, I'm afraid
wishing now things would be the same
I earned this
young and inexperienced
you still gave me the chance
and I blew it

not as happy with it, but I can always fine tune it.

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sullengirl September 29 2005, 22:59:20 UTC
thats sweet. i think id like to jam with you when you get into town. im not much better than i used to be, but guitar is f'n fun.

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