Drabble-H Honesty

[goldfishlover73]

Title: I don't
Author: Goldfishlover73
Cu/Au: AU?
Word Count: 402
Genre: Romance/General 
Rating: PG-13 (rated for suggested themes)
Characters: Kyouya, Tamaki, mentions of Haruhi Kyo/Haru
Summary: I don't love her. Not on your wedding day
AN: Thanks to enigmaticrose4 for the beta!

Comments

[enigmaticrose4]

Welcome! We love new writers here and I'm so glad to see a new one. :)

This was amazing btw, I saw a few typos in there, so you may want someone to beta it, but the content was superb.

If you want I'll edit it for you when I get home.

[goldfishlover73]

Sure that'd be great! *scans*

[goldfishlover73]

I fixed one big thing that I didn't catch, probably the one thing that stuck out to you, but if there is anything else please tell me! I always love when people correct my spelling/grammar! XD

[nicluv1787]

Fresh meat... I mean a new writer, Hurray! Welcome to musicroom 3 and all that. I'm one of your mod's Nicluv and you've already met Engima I see. I'll be make you your author tag and I hope you stay around to play. :D

Now onto my review.

I loved -no loved isn't a strong enough word, adored is much better- this the language you used was so raw and punchy. The use of italics was perfect and poignant. I loved the imagery of Kyoya and Haruhi in that last desperate embrace before she marries HIS best friend. Wow. Just wow. Then for Kyoya to stand there and watch her marry another man as Tamaki's best man that is the sort of thing dramas are made of. This was an absolutely wonderful entry into the community, welcome, welcome.

[goldfishlover73]

8D I'm so glad you liked it!
Now that summer is almost here I should be able to participate a little more!
^_^