This is really, really clever and Pascal's naivety is adorable yet totally understandable. Man I remember when I first heard how babies were made; first I thought my friend was lying and then I believed her and was like 'OMG EW WHY WOULD ANYONE EVER WANT TO DO THAT?!'. I'm still a bit like that ._., but I suppose I'm up to having my opinion changed; because if you think about it, the act of sex just doesn't sound that appealing when put into technical terms and if you think about what is actually done and you really wrote that in well. Great job.
This isn't even explicit and somehow you've managed to make it still sexy, really.
But I love how you did this from Pascal's POV and got it spot on, IMO! Then again, what can we expect from the person who authored the amazing, epic What You Don't Know?
Sexy and Funny
anonymous
November 8 2011, 12:50:22 UTC
Like the title says, both sexy and funny... but also adorable and -hot-!
Doing this from Pascal's POV is inspired; that he's got no concept of what's really happening makes it hilarious, but somehow his outsider's point of view looking in manages to give enogh detail to make it undeniably hot.
Love this - you've got Pascal's character so wonderfully down!
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But I love how you did this from Pascal's POV and got it spot on, IMO! Then again, what can we expect from the person who authored the amazing, epic What You Don't Know?
Again, amazing work!
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Favorite line!
And Pascal is adorably written with the way he has almost the memory of a goldfish. And doesn't know what's going on. ^_^
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Doing this from Pascal's POV is inspired; that he's got no concept of what's really happening makes it hilarious, but somehow his outsider's point of view looking in manages to give enogh detail to make it undeniably hot.
Love this - you've got Pascal's character so wonderfully down!
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