This was AMAZING. Pure gold. When she said "fuck me" I think I literally cackled. So perfect. I love that Eugene thinks she doesn't quite know what that means, but I think she knows exactly what it means and that's exactly what she wants.
Somehow you made it serious at the end, too, that he's circled back to Eugene, who is somehow shy about intimacy... or at least raunchiness. I'd love to see more of these two, who seem to be a little different from them in your other stories. Maybe other prompts will fit them.
The only confusion I had is that at the beginning it seemed like they already had a sexual relationship, so at first I thought it was just her language that shocked him. But by the end it seemed they had not yet had sex yet so the language AND the idea shocked him.
Thumb war and salt water taffy and the color yellow and fucking ARE the best things ever!
The phrase "sexy monster" really stuck with me; poor ol' Dr. Frankenstein Eugene, what has he created? Made me laugh. And I love how Rapunzel seems to relish her sexual power - and yet she stays in character. A little knowledge is a dangerous thing! Terrific, as always.
mrstater wrote a Eugene a little shocked and unnerved by Rapunzel's frank sexuality. It's a little unexpected and yet makes perfect sense too. Quite like this take on them.
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Somehow you made it serious at the end, too, that he's circled back to Eugene, who is somehow shy about intimacy... or at least raunchiness. I'd love to see more of these two, who seem to be a little different from them in your other stories. Maybe other prompts will fit them.
The only confusion I had is that at the beginning it seemed like they already had a sexual relationship, so at first I thought it was just her language that shocked him. But by the end it seemed they had not yet had sex yet so the language AND the idea shocked him.
Thumb war and salt water taffy and the color yellow and fucking ARE the best things ever!
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