Comments | must_fear_harpy: The Chameleon: Chapter 1

must_fear_harpy

The Chameleon: Chapter 1

Sep 03, 2011 12:24

Summary: A single theft causes chaos - from a girl's quiet life to the fate of an empire.

Warnings: mild language
G5 for Fic Bingo! "Steampunk AU"

( Chapter 1 )

bingo, tangled

Comments 4

cassiee September 3 2011, 21:16:26 UTC

This an awesome start! I bet Pascal was taking all those photos and recordings to show the outside world to Rapunzel. I love the little broship Flynn and him have, so cute.

Can't wait for more. AU+ Steampunk+ Tangled =Win. :)

ext_551216 September 4 2011, 00:02:18 UTC

So fun! I really like what you've done with Pascal. I'm intrigued...

thursdays_girl September 4 2011, 01:21:13 UTC

Never in a million years would I have thought this could be pulled off, but you managed to make this AU believably work. Bravo!

Steampunk!Pascal is adorable!

Fantastic start to what promises to be a really great fic. :)

yuenmei September 4 2011, 04:56:34 UTC

Love! I especially love the beginning, and Flynn's interaction with Pascal. Pascal is so cute. I love the head rubbing, and the paint buying, and all of his mannerisms. I love the description of the city and the world. The chameleon fight was a little confusing, because I couldn't tell who was attacking who with just "the chameleon" as a descriptor when there were two chameleons, but other than that it was great. I can't wait for the next chapter and meeting Rapunzel!