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deepad January 18 2009, 22:07:10 UTC
I really, really enjoyed this. The colloquial style was a great narrative choice, and you had some lovely imagery and phrases in here.
The characterisation seemed perfect, and I loved how young and raw and eager they both were. Very cool!

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mustakrakish January 18 2009, 22:12:06 UTC
Aww, thank you so much! It really means a lot ♥

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alicebluegown16 January 19 2009, 22:46:16 UTC
This totally broke me into itty bitty pieces and then put me back together with scotch tape and chewing gum.

I think what hurt the best is that Vine and E are so completely VinceAndE even at 13.

Also, the insult bootface and the image of those two as little six year old hellions whomping on each other is made of awww and squee.

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lp_drumline7 January 20 2009, 21:03:54 UTC
At least it was my good scotch tape! I tried! XP

Thanks so much <3

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crazy_thought January 19 2009, 23:50:09 UTC
i loved this. i love that eric telling vince he'd go is the only thing that could make his world okay, and that even more perefct when you know what happenes down the road. Great fic - espically for a first Entourage. Hope to read much more from you in the future!!!!

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lp_drumline7 January 20 2009, 21:04:12 UTC
Aww, thank you so much!

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viewofsaturday January 20 2009, 02:17:45 UTC
this is like all my favorite things wrapped up in one fic. THINGS I LOVE ABOUT THIS FIC ( ... )

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lp_drumline7 January 20 2009, 21:04:58 UTC
BAHAHA, I even get a play by play on this review. Eeeexcellent.

This made me feel so good about myself too XD Thank you so much for the comments, they really do make my day. Perhaps week!

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