I really, really enjoyed this. The colloquial style was a great narrative choice, and you had some lovely imagery and phrases in here. The characterisation seemed perfect, and I loved how young and raw and eager they both were. Very cool!
i loved this. i love that eric telling vince he'd go is the only thing that could make his world okay, and that even more perefct when you know what happenes down the road. Great fic - espically for a first Entourage. Hope to read much more from you in the future!!!!
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The characterisation seemed perfect, and I loved how young and raw and eager they both were. Very cool!
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I think what hurt the best is that Vine and E are so completely VinceAndE even at 13.
Also, the insult bootface and the image of those two as little six year old hellions whomping on each other is made of awww and squee.
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Thanks so much <3
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This made me feel so good about myself too XD Thank you so much for the comments, they really do make my day. Perhaps week!
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