When times get rough, get the mother.

[mustardplug426]

It's hard when a boy is standing on a urinal and you are shocked in the first place about being in the men's room

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ohh my gosh

[punkrockr127]

that must have been the fucking greatest story i have EVER read haah omg i love you charlotte..you know that only you could be the one to do that lmao wow that so totally kicks ass haha wow so yeah that just made my day ;) xox HeAtHeR

goodness

[catfood99]

thats so fuckign crazy, howd that boy get onto the urinal, wait no, i dont want to know

[karamel_baby]

HAHHAHAHA
some runons, some incorrect punctuation but EXCELLENT
iloveyou

and ifyou need to work on your spanish, call me
<3333

:-d

[mustardplug426]

lmao...omg Ally I love you.

<333333

yea..it kind of ends ubruptly too..I was having problems ending it last night.

and I was just reading it and noticed my super run-ons..oh well.

thnx babe..you know I always love your feedback

:hugs like woah:

xoox

oh and even if I don't have to work on my spanish I'll call you..

because umm..I love you and you're amazing..^_^

[anonymous]

just a few grammatical errors, but nothing you can't fix and nothing that takes away from the purpose/signifigance of the story
the ending's a bit on the awkward side, but it just a little work
VERY well done, my love
<3
i miss you, come visit
oh, and i might be coming to rhode island, or vicinity, to see "fall colors" with my mom. i'll definitely call you
what are you doing this summer?

again, VERY well done; i want to read some of those political pieces we were talking about
<3

[mustardplug426]

Mansi...silly you...you forgot to put your name!!!

and omg SOOOO fucking call me!!!

we can do it up...Rhode Island style.. ^_^

ummm I completely love you like woah!

<33333333 (x infinity [and beyond])

[anonymous]

teeheehee
i'm a silly little bumblebee
hellyeah! cause you know they do it best on that tiny dot on the map ;)
i love you times all the infinitely many solutions of the graph of y=3x+5
i was just doing Algebra hw
<333

MANSI
:o)