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mustaza

The Ends Justify the Means

Mar 27, 2011 16:46

Title: The Ends Justify the Means
Characters/Pairings: Jin, Charlotte, Daniel
Summary: “He will pay for your arrogance”
Spoilers/Warnings: Set in 4x10; mentions of torture and evil!Jin.
Disclaimer: I don’t own LOST.

A/N: Written for lost_in_108 , prompt #77: twist. Lack of inspiration, ugh.

( His blood only meant Sun's salvation )

character: charlotte lewis, character: daniel faraday, fanfiction, character: jin kwon, comm: lost_in_108

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mustaza March 31 2011, 22:34:31 UTC

Evil!Jin was something I wanted to see often on the show... actually, I wanted to see more Jin-centric episodes :( --- thanks for reading!

valhalla37 March 29 2011, 01:53:30 UTC

Ooooooh, Jin and Charlotte! I was always so intrigued by their relationship, and sorry not more of it was shown in the show. I'm also very intrigued by this, and this characterization of Jin pushed to the edge and harming someone for Sun's safety. Very cool!

mustaza March 31 2011, 22:41:31 UTC

I was so nervous about Jin's character here! I mean, I hated Jin for most of season 1, but then I understood his reasons... however, that interaction between Jin and Charlotte immediately made me think of a mafia torturer... and it would've been so interesting to write Charlotte's bad attitude (something I'm just starting to figure out... dying!Charlotte comes easier... gee, I need to write her snarkier)

primarycolors92 March 31 2011, 20:35:46 UTC

Scary! This is so great--really dark and really well written. I love the line "his blood only meant Sun's salvation" so much. This also feels like a complete story, which is so wonderful to find in a drabble/108!

mustaza April 2 2011, 00:41:09 UTC

WOW... you just left me speechless...

I wasn't so sure about posting this one, I thought it was rushed and could contain more emotions (I wanted to explore Charlotte's feelings further, but the 108-words limit didn't allow me to do it). Thank you so so much for reading and commenting :DDDD

aboutbunnies April 3 2011, 17:22:04 UTC

Wow...I'd have never wanted to see Jin become evil on the show, but you make it work here, in a sad and creepy way.

mustaza April 3 2011, 17:44:29 UTC

I think my writing muse was still shocked by the way they showed us Jin on "House of the Raising Sun" --- his first impression was scary, but obviously his character evolved -- then again, his look on "Something Nice Back Home" while he was talking with Charlotte reminded me of his torturer potential :/

Thanks for reading!