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mutedmumbles

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Aug 29, 2006 00:33

i apologize for being somewhat absent lately but between tennis, bass lessons, and hanging out with friends and with akira and generally having a life beyond the computer (which you all should have more of to be quite honest it's rather pathetic seeing you all attached to your computer screens like it holds the key to the fountain of knowledge or ( Read more... )

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scenehair August 29 2006, 04:43:04 UTC

I love you. ♥

mutedmumbles August 29 2006, 04:47:28 UTC

:) i love you too. ♥

scenehair August 29 2006, 15:07:57 UTC

Hey. D'you wanna go out dancing with Kikumaru and An-chan sometime this week?

mutedmumbles August 29 2006, 17:14:36 UTC

kikumaru-san just asked, but yes, that would be very nice. i'll call you. ♥

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princeofwriting August 29 2006, 05:17:56 UTC

Paragraph =/= sentence.

But I dunno. Maybe it was a little inspiring.

mutedmumbles August 29 2006, 05:22:33 UTC

of course it doesn't, echizen-kun, except it's easier to write like that because it comes naturally to me and honestly, who really looks to see if there are periods throughout the work they're reading, anyway? i know i never bother to look and just read whatever it is i'm reading the same way no matter what.

i'm glad to hear that. it's always good to be able to alleviate teenage angst of any sort since these are supposed to be the best years of our lives and all, right?

princeofwriting August 29 2006, 05:26:37 UTC

I look for periods. If there had been proper sentences and paragraphs, this may have gotten a thumbs up, but as it is... nothing.

Um. Right. Exactly. 'From this point on, our glory days begin' and all that.

fsshuuukitty August 29 2006, 06:02:19 UTC

That's a er... cute story. I guess. It was a bit rushed, but I think it might read less rushed if you used more full stops instead of just commas.

mutedmumbles August 29 2006, 06:08:42 UTC

full stops are over-rated, as i told echizen-kun. besides, i find it easier to write like this and the rushed tone was on purpose because the events were rather rushed as well (not that they happened in reality, mind you).

i, too, thought it was cute, so i'm glad you agree with me on that at least.

fsshuuukitty August 29 2006, 06:10:09 UTC

no need to get snippy about it, Ibu-kun. I liked the story.

nekonyahoi August 29 2006, 16:17:41 UTC

I like this, Ibu-kun!!! ^__^ You did a good job making it seem rushed!

Hey! An-chan, Kamio-kun and I are going dancing soon. You should come with us!!! ^___^

mutedmumbles August 29 2006, 17:13:04 UTC

thank you very much, kikumaru-san.

oh? perhaps i will because i enjoy watching akira dance and dancing with akira and i imagine the music will be great too and maybe i want to prevent another incident like last time.

nekonyahoi August 29 2006, 18:35:32 UTC

You are welcome!! ^__^

Yes! Akira is a good dancer! He's fun to hang out with. :D The music will be GREAT YES!! and omg you don't have to worry about that hahahah that was just that ONE time Ibu-kun!!! PROMISE!! We're just going DANCING and I didn't MAKE him, you know. ;P Its okay! :D