ok, revised verion of these...

[muthilltreble]

walking down this melancholy road one more time

Comments

long and held outish but moving...

[kinsemeka]

You're funny. That made me laugh because I could hear you saying it in my mind. And it's just plain not fair that you can sing and play AND write lovely, meaningful, expressive songs. Not fair. I wonder if there's a songwriting gene... and if there is, where the heck is mine? Sigh. Dramatic hand to the forehead. Okay. Bye now.

[annaleisa]

I like it and I can't wait to hear you sing it! :)