f: the shoplifter

[muwon]

→ the shoplifter | PG13 | yunho/jaejoong
→ Even if the circumstance was one hell of a pain in the ass, Jaejoong thought that meeting Jung Yunho on that unexpected Tuesday night would’ve been the best cliché to ever happen in his life.
→ prompt from WriteWorld. This was just some random one-shot I wrote after watching an episode of Carrie diaries.

Comments

[mitsui_tsuru]

>////< ahhhh so sweeet /flail

[muwon]

Thanks for reading! :)

[countingcr0ws]

omg. this was so good, omg, i'm sure i read something else from you before, and oh gosh! this: 'pansy looking dudes.' you sound exactly as brutish as my friend for a moment, i couldn't help but laugh. and i'm really not the kind to explicitly remember parts of stories that i've read. and oh gosh. i'm going to introduce that phrase to her. good grief. and it was so good, and oh! the virgin lips line. oh deer me. it was such a smooth line. hahahaha. wow, wow! i really really liked it. you're a great author! OuO oh on an after thought, you're fantastic! PuP!
and i reread it again. i think i was skimming it too much to actually read it properly, but oh. it was really good!

[countingcr0ws]

" They had a lot of things in common, much to his surprise. He also learnt that Yunho went to the same high school as youngest sister, and was actually a few days younger than him. Despite living in the same neighbourhood, they never really had a chance to run into each other and it was almost as if their meeting at the record store was fate's last resort for their paths to finally meet. "

is it, is it? it's the only mistake/ awkward sounding thing i could pick out, so here goes!
but i'm pretty half assed though... soo...
you could delete this comment after you edit if you wanted! OuO
in fact, please do!

[muwon]

Thank you! I tried to edit that part. I hope it doesn't sound too awkward anymore? lol

Glad you enjoyed this. :)

[secretgirlanu]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww... I like how Yunho is very brave to approach JJ here.

[muwon]

He's a cool guy here. lol Thanks for reading!

[dulanis]

This rocks. It's so awesome :)

[muwon]

Thank you, glad you thought it was awesome.:)

[ultamatempa]

jae's the most innocent "bad boy" ever :) i'm glad yunho's scared him straight (from the shoplifting, not the sexual orientation).

[muwon]

haha yeah Yunho's the cool guy here and JJ's the wannabe bad boy. :)) Great chemistry they got there~