Comments | muzicchick13: FIC: Someone to Save You, Cameron/Thirteen, House, Part 5

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FIC: Someone to Save You, Cameron/Thirteen, House, Part 5

Feb 19, 2009 03:00

Title: Someone To Save You
Chapter/Part: 5/?
Fandom: House, M.D.
Pairing: Cameron/Thirteen
Rating: PG-13
A/N: Firstly guys I'm sorry this took a little longer than the others. Secondly, I'm sorry because I'm posting this at 3 in the morning and I didn't even proof read for grammar. I think I did ok spelling wise but I promise when I'm not about to ( Read more... )

pairing: cameron/thirteen, fic

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muzicchick13 February 19 2009, 18:08:58 UTC

Thank you! And I agree about Chase, but I didn't want to make him an uber a-hole...just an a-hole, that's in character right? :) More is written, so I'll just wait a couple of days then post it.

bkwmkiwi February 19 2009, 12:14:35 UTC

Damnit, not the first XD I read way too slowly.
Argh! That was cute from the first line. Like, beyond adorable fluffiness.
I love how they alternate between perfectly normal friends and "Oh shit, what's happening here?"
The scene on the couch was so much love. There are no words.
You're keeping them wonderfully true to character, also, which is commendable.

♥ times a million. And I know you've already written the next chapter, so there will be no excuse for a long wait!

muzicchick13 February 19 2009, 18:10:31 UTC

:D I'm glad you like it! And thank you, thank you, thank you! I'm trying SO hard to keep them in character and not have it be like, "you're hot, I'm hot, let's do it!" you know? And yes the next chapter is written, I'll probably post this weekend. Gonna let this chap have it's glory too. :) Thanks again, I'm really glad you're liking it.

bkwmkiwi February 20 2009, 11:39:22 UTC

Your trying is PAYING OFF, because as a reader, I am also going "JESUS, just kiss her" and it doesn't happen, and the suspeeeense is killing me, but is so amazing at the same time, I am so impressed. I love how it builds up a tiiiny bit at a time - the kiss on the cheek? So frustrating. Yet so, so sweet. I'm loving it XD Waiting in anticipation :P But yes, good idea to wait to post!

shananigan00 February 20 2009, 04:04:20 UTC

i love this story! :) you are a great writer and i agree that you are keeping them true to character - well done and i am eagerly awaiting another post!

muzicchick13 February 20 2009, 04:33:18 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! :) I think 'true to character' is quickly becoming my favorite compliment.

alexz6 February 20 2009, 06:32:22 UTC

*sigh* oh Cameron
why can't you just go ahead and realize what's best for you?!
I'm looking forward to the next update!:D

mabe85 February 20 2009, 06:35:34 UTC

I like this chapter; tis very sweet :)