FIC: Someone to Save You, Cameron/Thirteen, House, Part 7

[muzicchick13]

Title: Someone To Save You
Chapter/Part: 7/?
Fandom: House, M.D.
Pairing: Cameron/Thirteen
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 12721 (Total)

Comments

[bkwmkiwi]

Yesss, update!
Veeery interesting writing devices you've used here. TOok me a hwile to get what was going on, but in the end, made everything quite clear.

I've never read a repeated scene without it sounding crap before, but you actually did this quite well. I would never have recommended it, but seeing as you had a little flashback, it was kind of good to read the same scene with a bit of background.

Also, you made it quite interesting to read again, with the different POV, and even having her not hearing everything that was said, that was a nice detail.

I'm hanging out for more...

[bkwmkiwi]

PS. I liked the last chapter better, fluffier. That's not to say this chapter is not awesome. But FLUFF FOR THE WIN!

[muzicchick13]

Well I try to switch it up. It can't be ALL fluff, it'd be boring. Gotta have some tension/angst/build up. But I'm glad you're enjoying it still. Don't worry, there will be fluff. I'm not sure when or where, lol, but there will be.

Thanks for reading. :)

[bkwmkiwi]

YES IT CAN. WHAAAAT?

(No, you're right, good writing XD )

Don't thank me for reading. Thanks for writing!

[brennooth]

It was great to read that in an other perspective! I liked that
:D More please? xD

[annechonps]

oh, SO GOOD. I love dual perspective. But I do admit I was almost running on my walls to know what happened in the parking lot scene :)
so funny when Thirteen says her thoughts out loud!

[anonymous]

MORE!!!!
PLEASE!!!