Marauder Rare Pairs ♦ Fic: Getting Her Own Black

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Title: Getting her own Black
Author: wwmrsweasleydo
Pairing: Lily/Regulus, (background Lily/James, James/Sirius).
Rating: Hard R
Word Count: 4250
Prompt: 24
Warnings: Contains explicit het and slash sex. Oral sex. Vaginal penetration. They are all quite young, bordering on too young, but old enough to have sex legally under British law.
Summary: Lily catches

Comments

[secretlypadfoot]

I'd rather fuck Regulus then James or Sirius! I love how he's characterized, he's got a bit of that Black attitude, without hardly knowing his own charm. And damn, he did pretty good for a first timer.

Lily should seek out revenge on James more often. I'm sure Regulus wouldn't mind.

[wwmrsweasleydo]

LOL. No, I think Regulus would be up for it again!

Thanks very much for your lovely comment.

[madeofsequins]

I love your Lily -- not 100% goody-two-shoes, not 100% scheming bitch. Perfect balance, and very nicely done overall.

[wwmrsweasleydo]

Thanks. I'm glad you thought I got Lily right. She's such a Mary Sue in canon that it was a challenge to know how to present her. Perfect balance? Well it doesn't get much better than that. Thanks so much!

[pavlablack]

I really like the way you take us through Lily's emotions--her happiness with James and her concern for him (which only makes his betrayal that much more heartbreaking), her instinct to run to Severus but knowing she can't, and the shock and pain that leads her to seduce Regulus. The sex between them and the aftermath seems awkward and uncomfortable (in just the right way), Lily caught between the pleasure of the moment, her hurt from seeing James and Sirius, and her guilt at using Regulus.

[wwmrsweasleydo]

Thanks. That's a great comment. That's just what I was trying to do.

[deathlydragon]

Oh, I was very excited to see this combination of pairings. I always wanted to read a Black for everyone. *coughs* I really liked your characterisations of Lily and Regulus, and their dynamic together was a pleasure to read. Great job!

[wwmrsweasleydo]

Hiya! *waves*

This was my first het fic - but did you notice how I (not so) subtly managed to squeeze some James/Sirius in there? LOL.

I'm really glad that you liked it. Thanks!

[eprime]

Wow, they're all pretty messed up here! I'd love to see the ensuing confrontation and hear all the gossip that flies around the school after this. ;)

[wwmrsweasleydo]

I do like to see the characters from this era messed up. Guilty!

I don't know what happens next, but they have to resolve their issues because Harry happens. He has to or there's no books. Hmm.

Thanks for reading and for reviewing!