Marauders Rare Pairs ♦ Fic: The Hogwarts Express

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Title: The Hogwarts Express
Author: fugacious_love
Pairing: Lily/Remus, one-sided
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~1900
Prompt: Lily/Remus, “Summer Skin” by Death Cab for Cutie
Warnings: None
Summary: And then suddenly Remus was very alone in his compartment.
Author's Note: Beta'ed by A

Comments

[deathlydragon]

That was really nice! Although I love this angsty thing of Remus having an unrequited crush on Lily, I really liked the funny moments you put in. Especially liked year four and their exchange there. "He must be morally lost without you, wherever he is." "He tends to be morally lost even when he's with me." Awesome. :D

[ravenread]

The structure of the seven train rides, as someone else also mentioned is very clever and interesting. I especially like the concluding line. It is a very fitting way to explain Remus' relationship to Lily/James.