Salt and Water chapter 4 ToraxShou

[mxtrxofsomer]

Title: Salt and Water
Chapters: 4/10
Author: mxtrxofsomer
Set and Theme: C #4 -Hunger
Genre: angst, romance, AU
Band(s): Alice Nine
Pairing: Tora x Shou
Rating: R
Warnings: vagueness, taboo, gore
Summary: “... it was an encounter too short from the view of the heavens, fair enough in the eyes of the humans, infinite from my own sense of time and... non-

Comments

[ramune_rockstar]

I was thinking of this fic recently so it's kinda cool that you updated :D

Anyway, I love this chapter. Shou's become human and it's so foreign to him. You're way of description is just awesome, by the way. My only criticism is that I do find a lot of grammatical mistakes throughout your chapters, but I've learned to ignore them to get to the meat of the fic. Keep up the good work, and I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

[mxtrxofsomer]

thanks for telling me. always thought something is wrong with my writing. and thanks for being patient even tho have lots of mistakes... i'll work harder. thanks again~~ ^^

[mxtrxofsomer]

wow~ thank you~ you just made my day. *was actually sulking because of loads of problems (school and family)* but i'm happy now thanks, really.
*snuggles back*
me too~ i want an angel shou...

[a_ashi]

awwwww as I said before I love this story
will you marry me?? *puppy eyes*
lol XD
I think I've said it before but i don't care
you write amazing hunnie ^^
really now....every chapter is getting more beautiful <3
and now shou became human and tora ... I just love his character <3
I kinda missed uruha in this chapter X"D but it was great anyway <3
I can't get enough of shou X"D

[mxtrxofsomer]

thank you so much... *hugs*
marry you? really? are you serious? i would love to marry you! xDD you're cute anyway...
aww, sadly uruha won't be back until... (it's a secret when) ^_~
and ohmigawd, your shou icon is giving me another fic idea... (is this good or bad?) i guess i won't be stopping writing these two anytime soon. once everything is settled with salt and water and i get enough ideas for that fic, i'll write it and i'll give you the credit for it~ ^^ (you have another thing to look forward to then)
again, thanks for the support... i'll work hard!

[a_ashi]

yes I'm serious *giggles*
yaaay I'm gonna have a wifey crazy about shou [like me ^_^]
awww uru is not coming back soon?
but shou and tora will make up for this <3

yaaay for my shou icon....is goodie that you have ideas...more for me to read *nods*

awieeee you don't need to give me credit...give it to shou cause he's the beauty ^_^[I'm such a shou freak -_-"]

awww hunnie you'll always have my support *glomps*

you're such a cutie pie ♥♥♥♥

[mxtrxofsomer]

yes, yes he's the beauty... gosh... i am in love with him too~
and there's nothing wrong about being such a shou freak. he's so nice stare at *keeps staring*
of course i'll give you the credit cos it's your icon that inspired it. and that would be a gift for my wife ^^ *hugs you dearly*

[arigachun]

Great chapter. ^^