Salt and Water chapter 5 ToraxShou

[mxtrxofsomer]

Title: Salt and Water
Chapters: 5/10
Author: mxtrxofsomer
Set and Theme: C #9 - Birthday
Genre: angst, romance, AU
Band(s): Alice Nine
Pairing: Tora x Shou
Rating: R
Warnings: longer than usual, and toraxshou overload for this chap
Summary: “... it was an encounter too short from the view of the heavens, fair enough in the eyes of the humans, infinite from my

Comments

[hotlikerobots]

OMGZ! An update!
I'm not sure if I've told or commented on you before but I really really adore this fic. Pretty much, it's one of the very few ToraxShou I've read and it made me so happy that you have updated!

On the other note, I still feel like I need reread them from the start since some things are still quite confusing me. o.O But as always, this was very well-written.

Can't wait to see the ending to this! Would it be soon? :P

♥

[mxtrxofsomer]

aww~ thanks for leaving me a comment. i really do appreciate it. *is really happy right now*

it's quite hard to maintain the style i used in this fic~ cos i have to keep the vagueness. but i'm sure you'll understand them. ^^ like i said before, i've left hints everywhere~

thank you so much for reading and commenting~ ^^ *hugsh*

[chiaki05_kr]

;_;"

This is by far the sweetest thing I've ever read.
I hope to know what you've in mind for this couple soon~ and I'm sure whatever it will be, it won't let me down.

日本語の試験のために頑張ってね～！
*_*/

[mxtrxofsomer]

ehhh? really? thanks so much. now i'm pressured?? ^^ but anyway aside from that, i have to enjoy writing this too... i hope i'd be able to keep it up for your expectation.

はい～～！頑張ります！
ありがとうね～\^^/
もしかして、日本語も勉強するのか？どう？勉強のことは？

[chiaki05_kr]

No, no pweese! D:
You don't have to feel the pressure at all! I just wanted to say that the way you write is really touching.<3

いえ、いえ、どういたしまして！*-*
はい、そうですね！私も日本語の勉強をしているんです！
二年前から大学に日本語の学生です！
君の事はどう？

[mxtrxofsomer]

今ね～日本語の授業はちょっと楽なんですけど。。。ほかの授業。。。例えば専門授業？？？ちょう難しいよ。やばいい～！とてもいやになった！ｘDDD
ワアアア！いいじゃん？二年前から？！日本語が好き？私もね、三年間半ぐらい勉強してた。まだ一年間があります。ちょっといらいらになった から日本語がすきかじゃないか、今わからない。。。T^T

でも私たちは頑張らなければならないでしょう？じゃ一所懸命やりましょう！！！^^/

wow~ really lots of thanks~ for that heartmelting comment. *is sooo much happy* i'll really work hard~ *huggles*

[mxtrxofsomer]

*glompifies*
iwuvvyoutoo~~ <33
an nuuu~~ no hurting yourself okey??? *tackles* chuu~ ^3^
i'm really glad you like it~
i love the way you write too you know~ ^_~ *me is patiently waiting for your fikku too~*

[jelliepish]

Aaaaah...this fic is very beautiful and confusing at the same time (Is that even possible? O_O) xDDDDD

There's so many question hanging...and Tora is not human??? and the one that brought Shou down from heaven is (I'm guessing) Tora?

Lol!! Really, I could shower you with question here but instead I'll wait patiently for the next xDDDDD

It's really is beautiful and with the scene kissing in the rain....awwwwww!!!(>__<)!!! But you should try it with the smut *pouts*

[mxtrxofsomer]

haha~ you're comment made me think like: O_O uh noes~ i have to work faster. xDDD srsly...

was it that bad? not writing the smut and leaving it all to your imagination? but but but... in that scene, i wanted to keep the sanctity of their you know what... xDDD so me purposely avoided smut cuz i dun wan to make it look like perverse. >.> i'll write smut eventually~ when i feel like it's needed or when it's appropriate~

thanks soooo much~ *huggles you* ^w^ the remaining five chapters will answer all your questions. let's see then~

[jelliepish]

Noooo.....It's not that it's bad without the smut...noooo, don't think that way...it's just that I'm a sucker for smut...hahaha!!! and the scene really is beautiful with the rain and all and I juat can't help wanting the smut ^___^

With all the question...it keeps the reader wanting more right? So I guess that it show how good of a writer you are *huggles* But if it motivate you to work faster then *goes into cheerleading mode* xDDDDD

[mxtrxofsomer]

yay~ *is hyped*

aww... i see... sorry for leaving the smut ne~? you can imagine them~ *dokidoki <33* but i'm really happy to know that you like that scene, is my personal favorite too...

ah nuu~~ >_< there's not such thing. i'm not really good. yes~ motivation!!! thank you so muchhhhh~~ you have no idea how much you made me happy... (because it's hard to tell) *is in tears*

[a_ashi]

*wipes happiness tears*
I was really wondering where are you?? *cuddles*
and you updated this before Shou's birthday *dansu* <3

this was so beautiful,as always ... if I was a little confused about Tora before,well this chapter made me understand him.The ending was sublime,the way Tora talked to Shou *cries* ... I always get emotional after I read this story
Let me be your warmth I don't know if it's even possible to fall for Shou more that I did,but I think it is *ish very in love with him* I wanna have my Shou too *pouts* and my Tora <3.I always loved Tora since he's the first one I liked in Alice Nine,but Shou owns my soul lol!~
and you made it rain ... I love rain <3.the moment between those two was perfect <3
and I wuv you mucho mucho <333 and awwww *cries again* you dedicate this chapter to me and langzhen <3

[mxtrxofsomer]

ehhh??? *grabs you* of course not hun~ your comments always makes me happy~ and when i saw how long it was, i was five times happy~ wee~

the truth is, this made me teary-eyed. really. *cuddles* i've been discouraged a lot of times, it always happens but seeing comments, no matter how simple they are cheers me up, slaps me hard and screams at me to continue. so what more if i received this kind of appreciation from you? such happiness and honour. ! it's already enough to make me melt on the spot~ xDDD and sometimes, even go dramatic. (i need to stop that tho) =.=" your comments mean a lot to me~ (teh influence) it's just hard to express by words eh??? but~~ i am soooo reaaalllllllllyyyyyy glad~~!

wah~ you like the last scene~ it's my fave too~ i was relieved to know that cutting the smut part did not affect it. *me thinks that it's not that appropriate*

aww... dun cry naw... okey??? no crying... tora doesn't want shou crying and me doesn't want my wife crying too eh~ *wipes tears away* *huggles*

i wuv you too~ nyaa~~~ \^3^/ chuu~<3

[a_ashi]

aaa this comment should've been posted earlier but lj crushed for a while >.<

well your story makes me 981430764 happy <3 *nods nods*

I actually read the last part with tear in my eyes. It was just so simple but beautiful.and you don't have to be discouraged *shakes head* you never fail to amaze me and the others *nods*.I'll support 'till the end,haha you wake up the cheesy part of me <3.and Ugh I wish I could write what I really think but is just hard to express it in words x33.I'm so happy!! you made my week <3,my month *giggles

[mxtrxofsomer]

*gets jealous with the screen* *pouts*
>.>
,
*GLOMPS* and *bites you* lmao..

eh, you had exams too. did they go well? i really hope they did! exams... they ruin life. xDDD but if you had shou as an inspiration, hmm... i thik it's okaay~!

*blushes* thanks for the encouragement... and those beautiful words... *is getting shy naw* me doesn't think i deserve them >_< *is not good* i'm already happy making people happy. and stir some kind of emotions in them or make them think about things and what i wrote. those are what i consider my fulfillment.

i'm picky with smut. (tho i love reading too) for me it has to be relevant (tho there are some pwps that i could enjoy) i dun know if i'm making any sense. xDDD i'll write but i think not in here. O_O i realized i'm almost finished~ but 5 chaps still is a long way...

nyaa~ i'm gonna go hikikomori mode. T^T but i'll be back ^_~

ireallywuvyousomuchnaw~ how do i tell you that besides repeating it over and over??? xDD chuu_ x500 times??? cus you're a fan of chuus~ ^3^