Porcelain Doll chapter 3/3 ToraxShou
Title: Porcelain Doll
Chapters: 3/3
Author: mxtrxofsomer
Genre: angst, romance, AU
Band(s): Alice Nine
Pairing: Tora x Shou
Rating: R
Warnings: Weirdness (I guess)
Summary: “Bring me back that brightness for I wish to stare at the chocolate coloured mirror reflecting my past”
Notes: awww… sorry about the last chapter. With a sudden inspiration from my wife a_ashi, I ( Read more... )
Chapters: 3/3
Author: mxtrxofsomer
Genre: angst, romance, AU
Band(s): Alice Nine
Pairing: Tora x Shou
Rating: R
Warnings: Weirdness (I guess)
Summary: “Bring me back that brightness for I wish to stare at the chocolate coloured mirror reflecting my past”
Notes: awww… sorry about the last chapter. With a sudden inspiration from my wife a_ashi, I ( Read more... )
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Other than that...it's a reallt beautiful fic...the part where Tora began to unbutton Shou's shirt to him saying "I love you"..gosh, it makes my heart ache because I felt how sad he is....
Your choice of words are beautiful and it keep me wanting more. I hope to read another from you ^___^
PS : are you still continuing "Salt and Water"? I love that fic too ^__^
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and yes... if you have interpreted it that way, then that is right. it actually has a lot of meanings but personally (if i'm the reader) i would also like it that shou's alive.
and yea, i'm continuing salt and water... i was actually working on it when this chapter bothered me to the point that i can't concentrate anymore.
again, thank you! *bows*
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Shou's alive, but the rest...I'm confused. *is feeling somewhat stupid for that*
I'm gonna have to read it again, I guess.
But the way you wrote it was just...beautiful. I could only dream of writing this nice and...and...it's just beautiful! rolfz
And btw, are you from the Philippines? *points at your CURRENT MUSIC*
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it's designed to be a bit confusing... and also be up to the readers' interpretation... cus i admire those kinds of stories i dun know why... but... so you can have your version of it. whatever that is, it would be correct. but if you're still confused.. maybe i could clear things... just a bit
ohmg... i dun know about my writing. i don't think it's good... srsly... and of course you can be awesome with your own style!!! believe it!!
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Of course I like the whole fic!! It was amazingly written how only YOU can do it!!!Your present is the best thing ever and I'll keep this fic as one of my precious memories -nods- <3.Cause I love it so much and I love,adore you!!!
This ending was well deserved indeed!!! God,the part when Tora shouted at Shou to wake up and unbutton his shirt was so sad!!But it was my favorite moment nevertheless because you described Shou's skin right the way it is. And I have this pic to prove that,except the one from my display pic.
I'm so very in love with this fic and with Tora and Shou and with YOU. <3.
I feel a little stupid though,cause I don't really understand something! Shou is alive,but how did he wake up?!!This has something to do with the story that little boy told Tora in the 2nd chapter?But if he's not alive ... it's such a mystery and I love it! ♥
I miss you so much!! ♥
luffs <3.
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it's really well written!!
dunno why, but i was totally entranced to the point i screamed with excitement xD
it was kinda confusing, kinda like a grown up disney kinda story...
this is nearly my otp and its simply beautiful.
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