Creole chapter 1 ToraxShou

[mxtrxofsomer]

Title: Creole
Chapters: 1/??
Author: mxtrxofsomer
Genre: romance, angst
Band(s): Alice Nine
Pairing: Tora x Shou
Rating: R
Warnings: not much
Synopsis: “circles, they never end”
Notes: I am utterly disappointed at my speed. Really… but it’s finally here so yay~

Comments

[faustusfaustine]

*rolls* awwwwwwwwwwww. This is a pretty sweet story, just read through the prologue. >w<

I am alright with the speed HAHA. Good stuff takes time, yeah?

: 3 Seriously, I felt so fuzzy after reading it.

>__< Tora is just so cute.

YAY FIRST MWAHAHA

[mxtrxofsomer]

wow.. thank you... i'm thankful that you consider this a good stuff.
and i am really very happy to know that i was able to make you fuzzy after reading... yay for shou and tora~~ wippie~~~
true, tora is cute, isn't he???
and being the first one. you get a HUGE huggle + squish... xDDD

[jelliepish]

Awwwww.....I like Clumsy!Tora (>__<)b!!!! Even better when it was Shou that's scolding him ^__^

So did Saga knows about Tora and Shou's "game of circle"?

I'm going "awwwwwwww...' when Shou kiss the cut on Tora's finger. Simple action but can stop your breath away....deadly!!! xD

[mxtrxofsomer]

wahhh~~~ thank you so much~~~
clumsy tora is just making us all swoon over him. yay for him! xDDD and right you are there that it's better with shou.
wiii~~~ i am so happy that you liked that part too... that was the part that took most of my time in writing this chappie... i've thought of a lot of ways to put it but the others were failures so i'm so thankful that it worked out here!!!

and... saga... saga knows a lot more stuff than that... *winkwink*

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[sazeixrinshou]

Awwww! I've been waiting you to update this fanfic and now. . . I love it so much~x33
they are so sweet. . . Hihi, i'm falling into clumsy!Tora right now XDD
by the way,thris, did my message reach you?D: *my internet connection was sucks sometime, i don't know if it reached you or not Dx*

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[mxtrxofsomer]

sorry i made you wait.. >_< but! yay! you like it you like it!!! wiiii~~~ *does cartwheels*
yay~ clumsy tora is made of win! he's adorable like that~~ i think tora wouldn't mind if you fall for him.
what message??? wahhhh??? really??? did you send me a message??? i didn't receive it!!! TAT *runs to you to get it* maybe you can try sending it again... waahhh~~~ *shoots internet*

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[sazeixrinshou]

nyaaaaaaaaa.... I fell for him but I'll love him better if he was with Shou... hihihihi XDD
ahhhh.... I had guessed it!! Dx I never had a chance to get online this lately so I sent you message from my mobile phone U_U and my mobile internet was very suuuuucks!!!!DDDx
I'll try to send it again!( TxT)/

[beambitious1]

awwww X3
they are such a cute couple!
update soon ^^

[mxtrxofsomer]

yay~ thank you so much!!!
yes, they are so cute~~~ hihi...
will do! (hopefully)

[a_ashi]

I read this when you posted it but when I wanted to make the comment my internet connection fell and then I didn't log on lj x33.
Just let me tell you I luv your Tora!!! So clumsy <3.And Shou seems so strong and .. manly O.o -pats him-.
Tora is adorable when he's clumsy and and you just described him perfectly <3.
Continue this story cause I like the way you started it and it makes me curious what about Aoi?? XD.

don't worry,uke Shou will be back eventually XD

[mxtrxofsomer]

aww so that was what happened. i was wondering if you've read this. cus, even tho i've written this as a chapter, i've also written this for you cus you wanted a clumsy tora and... and if you didn't get to read it, it's kinda incomplete~ cus i wrote it for you~~~ >_<

i'm glad you liked tora's carelessness here and you're right about shou, he's strong that's why i was asking myself: where did uke-shou go? xD but i think shou fits the role. tora has some weaknesses that only shou is able to take care of for him. i kinda like their relationship in this fic.

and yea, uke-shou's definitely gonna come back! he's always going to be the uke in my eyes. xD

[a_ashi]

Nuuu I did read it but I guess I had bad luck and then I practically isolated myself for lj x33.

I love their relationship here too!!! Shou is more .. manly in here *rofl*

haha yeah ... uke with and only for tora XD