Comments | mxtrxofsomer: I Drink in Your Presence Like a Bottle of Chandon chapter 1/1 AoixUruha

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I Drink in Your Presence Like a Bottle of Chandon chapter 1/1 AoixUruha

Jan 21, 2009 18:47

Title: I Drink in Your Presence Like a Bottle of Chandon
Chapters: 1/1
Author: mxtrxofsomer
Genre: romance
Band(s): the GazettE
Pairing: Aoi x Uruha
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: not much
Synopsis: “nothing is the same ever since”
Notes: i'm late but this fic is dedicated to the birthday boy. xD

( Escape, you call it that name for it has all the elements of bliss your one aspect of life fails to grasp, but when a flash of image reminds you of it, you struggle to keep yourself but you always end up stumbling. )

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Comments 10

xxshamisen January 21 2009, 12:06:53 UTC

I find this fic evil. Beautiful, yet evil. Honestly it's nothing like I've read before (that is, being well written despite it being in second person) and it's a breath of fresh air for me, really. ♥

But it's still evil. ;_;

mxtrxofsomer January 23 2009, 15:57:33 UTC

wow, thank you. although the second person pov is not really that original. i'm pretty sure it's been used a lot of times already.
it's evil? really? but but... how come?

xxshamisen January 23 2009, 16:14:07 UTC

Well yes, but I've never seen such a well written fic that's in the second person. ^^

LOL because it's really sad~ and I really dislike sad endings because I end up feeling sad too ;_; LOL but that's just me being an emotional fangirl~ xDD

mxtrxofsomer January 23 2009, 16:51:42 UTC

thanks, really.
it's sad? well, i guess if you think it is. but, i'd like to think otherwise. after all, the ending leads to a lot of things. i'm not much of a conclusion fan cus i like stories still living on after the endings. maybe i've hinted that not all of what's going on between them is right but, there are also some things in there which indicate that they'd make it good (if you want to believe, if the reader wants to believe ^^) and to tell you the truth, this is a birthday gift for aoi (tho i doubt he'd like it) and i'm not really that cruel. xD

murmeldyr January 21 2009, 13:42:08 UTC

Wooh I really like the way you wrote this! It's quite good ^^

mxtrxofsomer January 23 2009, 15:58:38 UTC

yay~ thanks. i'm happy to know that you like the way i wrote it~

arigachun January 21 2009, 23:39:27 UTC

I really liked this so much. I loved the last thing Uruha said to Aoi. ♥

mxtrxofsomer January 23 2009, 16:03:33 UTC

thank you. yay, i'm so happy to know that uruha's line had an effect on you~ i like them silent sometimes but a few words can really be powerful.

a_ashi February 8 2009, 23:20:54 UTC

-speachless-
I don't even know what could I possibly say to this one O.o
It was beautiful and the ending ... oh my <333.

mxtrxofsomer February 9 2009, 15:40:16 UTC

wah, really?
thank you~~~
hm, the ending is quite happy if people will just notice it~~ ^^