Narcolepsy chapter 1/1 ToraxShou

[mxtrxofsomer]

Title: Narcolepsy
Chapters: 1/1
Author: mxtrxofsomer
Genre: attempt at fluff? you know how weird I can get
Band(s): Alice Nine
Pairing: Tora x Shou
Rating: R-NC-17 (yes you’re gonna read some from me, brace yourselves)
Warnings: my own version of fluff but try reading cus I did try
Synopsis: “How do I know that you ain’t gone away? ”
Notes: this fic has a

Comments

[chimerari]

pls don't take it the wrong way...but I'd like to say that this would be a more enjoyable read if you try to cut down on some of the over-detailed descriptions.
hmmmm....I don't really know how to say this, but it feels as if each sentence on its own was beautifully constructed, but I just spent way too much time onworking out the individual meanings to actually grasp the plot.
Saying that, I did like some of the comparisons you drew, they were cerrtainly noval.

[mxtrxofsomer]

that is no problem with me and i'm actually glad that you told me that. you do have a point and i can see it. however, maybe it's within out nature to give reasons behind the things we do. so maybe i can let you see my side

[love_akira]

i found this really beautiful....wow
Love the song...my first time hearing it but nice.

[mxtrxofsomer]

wow, thank you~
i'm happy to know that you like the song too. i love binocular music and that particular song inspired this fic too~

[sazeixrinshou]

Nyaaaa~~~THRIIIIIS~~~*hugs very tight*
THOSE ARE SO SWEET~~!
Kyaaaaa~i love the family part ~~xDDD yay!For toraxshou champaign~!*get ten glasses at once*

[mxtrxofsomer]

*hugs back* hihi~
they are, aren't they??? that part is a win for me too~
yes, we go spread toraxshou love~ and ohgm! toraxshou champagne!!! let's drink em!

[jelliepish]

OoOOH...I love it!!!!

The first scene is beautiful and you wrote the almost subtle sex scene gorgeously ^____^

My favorite has to be the family scene....awwww!!!(>__<) I want to be Hanako xDDDD

Great job <3 and I agree, we do need more of ToraxShou ^___^

[mxtrxofsomer]

yay~ i'm happy to know that you like it~!! really
aiyi~ the first scene, yea. i have a kinda different view about smut so i'm glad that it worked out
awww~ you wanna be hanako-chan? then so you are! hello there hanako-chan! hihi~ *pokes you* you're lucky you have tora and shou as daddies. *huggles you*

yea~~~! MOAR toraxshou!!! i'm slowly dying due to the lack of luff for this pairing. TAT

[a_ashi]

OMG Wait .. me is a little confused!!! So Tora is a day-dreamer like you and me? XDDD.
You you made Tora and Shou ... daddy's!!! When the girl called him daddy my mind was black for 3 seconds! O_o
XDD
But I loved it!!! It's beautifully written as always <3.

[mxtrxofsomer]

yes he is~ xDDD and as the title implies, they're actually a series of interconnected daydreams that tora keeps on having ever since his encounter with shou which is the last scene. but they're not just dreams, they have the chance of becoming true if tora only realizes it and chooses the right path. the bgm has a lot to do with the whole story too~

wahh? what do you think about them being daddies of a little girl then? they don't fit?

thank you so much~ i'm happy to know you like it~~~

P.S. I LOVE LOVE YOUR ICON! AND I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU TOO~~~!!! <333

[a_ashi]

Awww i thought so!!! Now I understand it completely <333.

Nuuuuu it's cuteeee!!! I was shocked but in the good way -nods-

<333

I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU TOO!!!! <3.