Never Alone AoixUruha

Mar 20, 2008 18:15


Title: Never Alone
Author: mxtrxofsomer
Chapter: 1/1
Genre: Fluff
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: AoixUruha
Warnings: Unbetaed as always
Synopsis: I grew up in Yokohama that is why I am used to going here in Yamashita Park every now and then.
Comments: I can’t take it if I’m not able to write anything within this week. I know I’m busy but... So, okay, here is a ( Read more... )

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anonymous March 20 2008, 10:51:29 UTC
Nice story!! XD
sometimes i feel that kind of bond to ^-^
Maybe it's just a simple bond, but deep inside...
Hope uru & aoi be together forever...nyaaa~ XD

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mxtrxofsomer March 21 2008, 01:14:51 UTC
yea~ i wish for them to be happy too~
thank you for commenting... ^^

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aoi_shiroyama March 20 2008, 10:56:52 UTC
Wow I really felt as if I'm the observer... I felt like I'm really watching the both of them talking and I feel like I'm envious, too xDDD Nicely written! ;)

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mxtrxofsomer March 21 2008, 00:48:14 UTC
wow thank you~
we're envious but we can't help it. we love to see them together too.. xDD

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my_turtle_pear March 20 2008, 11:26:28 UTC
i really really like this~ like REALLY LOVE it!!!~~~ i like how it wasnt from ao or uru's POV but an on looker...its different and new and i liked that a lot...miss your fikku's ne~ ...and cute rei

but...i LOVE and thats all that matters~ HAHA~~~ *cheeky grin*

...and cant wait until your chapters come out~!!! *claps*

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mxtrxofsomer March 21 2008, 00:49:44 UTC
hahah!
you miss your cute rei eh? i'm expecting that.
i'm writing him now so~ dun worry~
i miss your comments too.. *hugs*

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my_turtle_pear March 21 2008, 03:30:43 UTC
haha~ yeah~ you know me well now~ haha~~~ i cant get enough of him~ *sigh* ooo~~~ i cant wait until you post it~ *bounces*

aw's~ *hugs* cant wait for more ne!!!~~~

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mxtrxofsomer March 21 2008, 01:02:12 UTC
it's okay.^^
idea is, to insert aoi and uru in a musing of a total stranger who doesn't really want to reveal herself fully. thanks for reading and telling me. ^^ *me really appreciates it*
*hugs back*

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ayo_l March 20 2008, 16:15:10 UTC
Aww, this was cute, very skillfully written n___n I liked how your style was kind of simple but still vivid, everything made sense but there was nothing unnecessary there.

Still I kind of agree with shinyane, that something was missing. Maybe this would've been better as a prologue for a chapter story.. (or then it's just that this was so cute I just want to read more 8---D)

Anyway, well done! n____n/

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mxtrxofsomer March 21 2008, 01:06:55 UTC
yayiii~
prologue to a chapter fic? waahh~
i don't think i can. when this idea struck me, i was really planning for it to be short. but that is a good encouragement...
thanks so much~ i'm happy to know that you want to read about them more~ ^^

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