Caviar and Cigarettes [part 1/4]

[my_0wn_madness]

Title: Caviar and Cigarettes
Author: my_0wn_madness
Beta: fuzzyniffler
Overall Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Jailbait!Arthur (Arthur's 16-17 to Eames' 27), toys (vibrator), slight and very brief breath play
Characters: Arthur/Eames
Summary: When the landlord - Eames, a man of British heritage, a sculpted body and approximately 30 years of age - answers the door, Arthur knows

Comments

[psmithery]

HNNNNGH. That was what I needed. Now I just need MOAR. *salivates with anticipation*

[my_0wn_madness]

:D Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I promise to update it tomorrow c: ♥

[kimuranakai]

I'll never get enough of jailbait!Arthur! I love how young, intense, and real your Arthur's voice sound (and ALL THE PINING). I love your Eames too, IC and aloof.
I can't wait for reading the rest of the story!

[my_0wn_madness]

God, jailbait!Arthur is so wonderful. He was one of those characters that I had no idea I liked until I read him once and then I fell hopelessly in love. I'm glad that I'm portraying him all right! :D Eames as well. I'm always so timid with Eames as I'm American, and I'm sure it shows u_u

But thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it c: <3

[ladderax]

I also need more. SO HOT. I loved seeing Eames through Arthur's eyes, and watching them both struggle with their desires. They were both so believable and sympathetic (although I really, really hope Eames gives in and gives them what they both want...mmmm).

[my_0wn_madness]

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it :D And I'm not sure Eames can resist jailbait!Arthur for too long :P Though, really, no one can blame him.

the absolute awesomeness I just read

[bluetilo]

Hell has a special place for people like me. I simply adore jailbait! Arthur, and while there is a lot of underage fics out there, not all of them are as great at this. God, this story is promising!

I must say I love your smoking!Eames. Cigarettes on Eames lips are sexy, health be damned.

Ariadne is made of awesome too. "'You cant give up. He kissed you for gods sake" <---- that's right, you go, girl! keep this boy on track!

I love when Arthur/Eames see/hear Eames/Arthur having sex/jerking off before they kiss or have sex or something. It really enhances the sexual tension in the most delightful ways.

Eames inner conflicts are to die for. <3

By the way, your descriptions of Eames are to die for. <333

Random quotes:
"he resisted the urge to say he could pay with a lot more than cash"<----, Arthur, honey, I'd pay with a kidney if it meant I'd get the chance of offering *THAT* kind of payment. I know your pain! *_*

"no blasting any music unless it's good" <--- Eames, thou art love xDDD

Re: the absolute awesomeness I just read

[my_0wn_madness]

*starry eyes at long comment* *_* ♥

And, oh, I'm sure I'll be joining you in that special place in hell. At least we get the pleasure of jailbait!Arthur :3

Eames smoking is one of my favorites. His lips are far too perfect for cigarettes-- it'd be a shame if he didn't smoke. And yes, we'll turn a blind eye to the health risks.

I'm really glad that Ariadne's all right! I'm always afraid when writing girls of any sort. Which is odd because I am one. I just feel like women can be done so poorly so often, so I'm always a bit nervous. ^^;

Rofl, yes, Eames is most certainly worth a kidney :P That's why we have two, after all!

Oh yes, there's still a lot to come. I promise to post the next part tomorrow.

And thank you so much for the wonderful comment! I'm really, really glad you're enjoying it so far! c: ♥

[twisted_ream]

The. Greatest.
From time to time I was drooling and having major oxygen deficiency.
Wonderful. Just wonderful. and... It's not even done yet. Let me pass out for a min.
'applause'

I didn't really see a problem in their problem though, I mean, why couldn't they? huh :D

[my_0wn_madness]

Ah, thank you so much! Just remember to breathe :P I'm really glad you're enjoying it! :D ♥