Story. don't laugh i suck at writing.

[my__tradgedy]

                                                                                    it all fell down

You see the truth is, I've never fell so hard. Ty's oversized cushony Bose headphones blared to the sound of The Spill Canvas. His head sullenly pressed against the back of the bus seat that lied opposite of him. His naturally twilight black

Comments

[rezeew828]

psht you can't write yeah right, that was AMAZING. good good job, it was depressing though i hope it's not reflecting your mood.

i love you!

[my__tradgedy]

haha thank you Fima!
i love you
=)

[nothing__inside]

I remember the time you read that to me, and I laughed and said " haha, that mother fucker got shot."

[my__tradgedy]

haha
you did you did

[hated_hart_108]

very good-
un problema- the ending was sort of sudden..like it went into a climactic moment really quickly

otherwise it was very very good
(im a writer too im very picky)

lerve ya

[my__tradgedy]

haha i know that was the point.
actually the orginal ending was

"his best friend was dead. his world faded to black.

END"

but i dono. i changed it.

That was the only story i wrote in that format.
baha.

lerve ya tooo

[taldarknhandsum]

It made me chuckle... He HATED everyone... =)

[my__tradgedy]

haha the way you said it this morning made me laugh all day.
twas awesome.

He hated them

HE HATED EVERYONE!!!

[mohawksr_sex]

very good. you told me about this. i liked it. liked the characters. and the ending, its sort of refreshing when a story ends like that it leaves a lot to the imagination.

or maybe i'm just full of shit :P
xo.

[mohawksr_sex]

oh and YAY for spill canvas.

!!UR ADDED TO THE BEST FUCKING COMMUNITY IN THE FUCKING WORLD!!

[fuckfuckfuck69]

I_luv_2_fuck is the best fucking community, and your added! congratulations!

Re: !!UR ADDED TO THE BEST FUCKING COMMUNITY IN THE FUCKING WORLD!!

[my__tradgedy]

haha thanks